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Conclusion 0 0%
Limited Edition 5 100.00%
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Old 11-20-04, 11:52 AM   #1
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Old 11-23-04, 02:16 PM   #2
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Uppin' for fuck sakes...favors will be returned.....
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Old 11-25-04, 03:29 PM   #3
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Fuck uppin' on this shit yet again...come on lets get them votes poppin'...
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Old 11-25-04, 03:42 PM   #4
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition

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Limited Edition got this one for more lines and a better flow. No Hate. Just Honest Feedback.
 
Old 11-29-04, 02:33 PM   #5
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Uppin'...fuck this has been slept on haven't been on for 5 days and still no votes...
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Old 11-29-04, 02:48 PM   #6
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This was feedback posted for Conclusion

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Alright I was gonna vote on this but whats up with
your verse C ? just outta interest why didnt you get
this closed...

What up LE long time man stay up

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Old 11-29-04, 08:29 PM   #7
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Fuck this is bein slept on...fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 11-29-04, 08:39 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition

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Inferno Blossom's and Dance;s Around My Child's Bedroom
Intense Heat Lashe's My Face, Could This Be My Doom?
^^^^^^^^^^ WAS THAT IT......READ THA RULE'Z BUT I LIKE THIS BAR.......VERY CREATIVE.........AND GOOD




IMAGINARY.....THATS AN THOUGHTFUL BAR......The way shit is fated, we sometimes take life overated...
We don't want to face it, but life's salty sometimes when we taste it
The anger within, you can sense when the danger begins...
People fuck wit you, have no trust in you, the flame seaps through the skin
You just wish you could die, sometimes you can't survive...
Everything around you a haze, a blaze, it's like your burning alive
You can see the burst, of the flame, it symbolizes your pain...
Oh God it hurts, nothin can save you, pray for the grave, it's insane
Nothing can save you, not even the talent God himself gave you...
You're just a brave fool, fuck it, your a puppet, just a stage tool
Hopes and dreams? Forget it, you just ain' nothin just admit it...
You don't want to live it, but it's hard when your own mom said it
Don't get it twisted, happiness is somethin' truly gifted...
Until the day, I pray, the tormenters' opinion that abused me shifted
You don't really care, when people burn, people stare...
I'm not fussy, I'm not ever fuckin' lyin, trust me...I was there...
^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA GOOD FLOW.....NICE IMAGINARY........AND GOOD CREATIVITY


CONCLUSION- DAMN~! LIMIT STOP PUTTING 200 POST JEEZE'Z ANYWAY.......LIMIT EDITION GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE OF.........MORE.........CREATIVITY......IMAGINARY. ......GOOD FLOW..........AND MORE THOUGHTFUL........

CONCLUSION- DONT WRITE 1 BAR READ THE RULE'Z OK BEFORE U POST YA VERSE AIIIIIGHT

BUT THAT 1 BAR DID ALMOST HAD ALL THE TOPICAL QUALITIES....NICE BAR~!
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 12-03-04, 12:23 PM   #9
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Voted For: Limited Edition

The way shit is fated, we sometimes take life overated...
We don't want to face it, but life's salty sometimes when we taste it

tHATS THE line that won it...

LOL v/ Limited Edition..


Conclusion....u need 2 elevate...as a battle verse that was WEAK
AND U COULDNT EVEN FOLLOW DIRECTIONS 2 lines On a 16-20..
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Old 12-04-04, 09:08 AM   #10
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You Stupid Fuck's, Why Are You Not Reading My Entire Verse? I Had To Post Two Line's Cos I Would Have Missed The D-Line, Whore's.
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Old 12-09-04, 12:08 AM   #11
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Uppin' for some more votes on dis bitch...
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Old 12-09-04, 12:21 AM   #12
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i vote for limited because he followed the rules.......
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Old 12-09-04, 03:07 PM   #13
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Uppin' for some more votes...favors will be returned...
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Old 12-09-04, 10:44 PM   #14
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Voted For: Limited Edition

Aii first of all if your Gonna battle check out the rules LOL But N e way its very clear to see that Limited Edition Has this one bcuz he HAS punchez and He HAS personals and he HAS a verse LOL Im guessiin You didnt mean to post one bar im i riight? n e way Limited and conclusion Yall RTF!!!
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