Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

Jay-SmileZ - Good spit your punches wernt to bad.. and your flow wasnt to bad either.

Best Line - hit wit "SoldeiR-RapZ" that drops like a "BoulderS-BAsH" only applause u get is when i cave ya chest to make "shoulder-ClaP"/
this homo drops rymes an "two-months-pass"... he thinks his ryme is breathless but its cause i made his "lungs-collapse"/

Worst Line - this dude is like terror-ISTS with tur-BANS when they go thru security thet HEADS GETTING CHECKED QUICK/

Lyrically - your shit was WHACK!

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - Nigga you think you a challenge to battle,
Cop a nine to ya head you hear the clack-clack-clack and I dont mean your bone rattled,

OVERALL - Jay took this wit ease, the other guy had flow but thats about it. You need to work on throwin some punches in there and alot of other things you need to learn.

Vote - Jay-SmileZ

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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

open: L.B:-"Nigga you think you a challenge to battle,
Cop a nine to ya head you hear the clack-clack-clack and I dont mean your bone rattled," -This is a pretty wild opening, clever and funny.

close: Jay:-"half his rymes was homo-intended, thought of REAR ENDS when i posted no DICK-RIDING he thought i OFFENDED?/
only reason he rymes is cause they told'em grown n be spittEN he thought he might just get his homo virginity ended/" -Mad bro! Im feeling this big time.

multis: no contest. Gonna have to say Jay. Dragged his lines out and fitted it all perfectly. Real good verse

flow: Im definately likin L.Bs flow, quick and stylish. Jays got a heavy flow too.

punches: Givin it to Jay. was ill punches. A lot more personal than LB's that pretty much wat won it for you in my opinion.

win: Sorry LB man, this was all Jay-SmileZ

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