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Old 11-16-04, 01:06 PM   #16
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ROFLLLLLLL^^^^......sinner~this wasnt bad, like seven said, the quality needs work, it really makes the track that much better...your flow is good, you improved a lot,keep it up man, and you'll be better in no time,1
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Old 11-16-04, 01:11 PM   #17
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thanks for the love.... but I do realise that I have to improve my sound quality and my spit to make it more used to flowing to the beat but Im just practicing and I had fun practicing on mad dog he's an easy target lol because he dissed me...
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Old 11-16-04, 04:02 PM   #18
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Old 11-16-04, 05:00 PM   #19
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tha q only fags say shit like that and guess what you are....
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Old 11-16-04, 05:49 PM   #20
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U elevating a bit kid.. keep it up.
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Old 11-17-04, 03:57 AM   #21
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its disses like these that make me wonder why i'm still here?...better luck next time
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Old 11-17-04, 05:47 AM   #22
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You Improved.

You went from very shit to just shit...

OK... flow was hella choppy... like.. you stopped and started a lot.. voice had no confidence or emotion... Quality was ass.. some punches made me laugh... not laugh because they were funny, but because they were wack.. i think it was that "boob, noob, boob-tube" one, or something... hahaha.. anyway.. yeah..

keep elevating.. Use "noise reduction" and "Hiss Reduction" to improve your quality... also it might be smart to do a little dynamics processing to level out the waves..

Work on emotion.. and try to flow better.. (not choppy)
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Old 11-17-04, 10:37 AM   #23
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...this was... crap...flowed well i suppose, u talked way to fast.... some rappers can pull off the fast rap, but you aint no busta rhymes, twista etc. they can pull off the fast rhymes... and u blew into the mic to much.... any way..... anybody sinner bitch?
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Old 11-17-04, 10:42 AM   #24
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anybody sin a clown? fuck off bitch otherwise i'll drop a diss on your ass that'll wish you were never born mutha fucker the problem occured because i didn't get rid of the noice reduction im only new to cool edit so fuck off bitch go kill yaself.... fuckin clown
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Old 11-17-04, 11:34 AM   #25
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lol accept my call out then bitch... drop any sort of diss you want to bitch... dont bother me in the least, especialy after i heard this garbage
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Old 11-19-04, 12:26 AM   #26
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I wasn't really feelin this..ya flow was way off..and yea....its quality sounds worse then anything i've ever heard
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