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Old 11-19-04, 02:41 PM   #1
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Thanks bro... I 'preciate it...

btw pm me the new council password vinch the wench didn't pm me the right one...
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 11-19-04, 05:31 PM   #2
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Knew you had it in you dogg, this was some crazy, heartfelt shit. You brought fire to it that i don't usually see in your battles. Stay on this typa high nigga. Fosho

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Old 11-23-04, 02:52 PM   #3
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I was likin it. big time. you stretched the lines a bit, but it worked, really well.

Good imagination, real good vocab. I was feeling the emotion. This is real heavy. Im gonna steal it and tell all my mates i wrote it...lol
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Old 12-02-04, 08:45 PM   #4
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damn... breathe was so dope shit made me lose my breathe, but this shit put me to death. dope shit nigga. nah layins? weerd... 9.8/10
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Old 12-03-04, 02:44 PM   #5
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yea its pretty nice.....the chorus is kinda boring tho....everything else firm...i liked the vocab you used preticurlay the Second Verse...well keep it up..i'mma peep more....

overall-8.5/10...

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Old 11-19-04, 02:45 PM   #6
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lol, aiight, I'm guessin you at school, since you aint on AIM or msn.
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Old 11-19-04, 02:46 PM   #7
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yeah...

I am...
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Old 11-19-04, 02:50 PM   #8
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ok iowa says 9/10 cause that was tight as fuck man i really mean it i feel the same way about Keokuk man its a shit hole ass town
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Old 11-19-04, 02:51 PM   #9
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thanks for the feedback Iowa...

Keokuk... that name is just cool.
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Old 11-19-04, 02:53 PM   #10
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tite shyt son datz sum of da illest shyt i eva seen son, ummm yea son i giv it like a 9/10
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Old 11-19-04, 02:54 PM   #11
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thanks man... appreciate the feedback...
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Old 11-19-04, 03:13 PM   #12
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Ayo son i was rely feelin dat shit son. Keep doin ya thing. Wordplay and and multies were hotness. overall i'd giv it a 9/10. If u got anymor shit dat needs feedback holla at me!
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Old 11-19-04, 03:34 PM   #13
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Yo Vp

Anotha One Of Dem Dope Open Mics'z Huh?

Nice Mayne Good Emotion Kinda Humor But Its Good Though

Dope
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Old 11-19-04, 04:42 PM   #14
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omg... damn... I been sick all day you fuck and you call me to make me read this shit fuck you.

ubt yeah it was hotness its da truth too my nigga its da truth

keep it up and they gonna love the spectrum aint they
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Old 11-19-04, 05:02 PM   #15
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that shit was tight homie... keep it up. should win fo sho... keep em commin 9/10
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