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- Gødz Ångël - 5 71.43%
spinn 2 28.57%
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Old 11-20-04, 09:32 PM   #16
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Old 11-21-04, 05:26 AM   #17
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Voted For: - Gødz Ångël -

- Gødz Ångël - got this 1 easy came way harder had the stuture n flow rhymes n shit nuttin wrong with that she get my vote no douts easy win 1 sided all the way

spinn came rly weak hardly had anything flow was ight and rhymes but no punches at all that was rly weak i gotta say ur wackest battleever

- Gødz Ångël - get my vote came way hard spinn came wack had nuttin

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Old 11-21-04, 10:17 AM   #18
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Thanx for the vote..... And by the way.... Hmm... Im a dude...... Pff.,... lol...

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Old 11-21-04, 02:03 PM   #19
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Old 11-21-04, 02:28 PM   #20
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Voted For: spinn

So, What is up "spinn" I should thank you now for giving me a win,
You are back now, your ass is now my working station, Welcome in,
that was aight

You have real bad skills I admit, No please, Dont shit, Just Quit it,
Leave this place before I leave you "Spinnin", And leave me winnin
WTF? nah man

the rest of ya verse was weak as-well noting good really besides ya opener which was aight keep elevate'in 6.0




1-I’ll sticc a FORK through “Angel” so she can really feel the breeze//
2-Have wonna-be "GODZ" hated by many.like the taste of "blacc-eyed-peas"//
that was a better start

3-I called u out so do wut u do, like the “Baccstreet Boys” you’ll be left blacc & blue//
4-Listen chicc you’s a fake wit “jet-lag” cuz ya rhymes r weary’R than mine(jetlag=weary)
WTF?? weak

PAUSE U CANT EVEN COUNT SON WHAT HAPPEN TO NUMBER 5??? u went from line 4 to line 6 WTF?

6-You could spit fast or slow & ya rhymes will always blow//
7-I wont even holla @ you girl..cuz I don’t spit at hoes//

8- You can’t think “off the top” like pigs with their cerebrum still intact//

that last line was the best line in this battle and sad to say just cuz of the first bar and the last line even thou u had a miss count i still think u won due to better diss and punch
the last line is what really did it for u but danm this was weak as fuck plus this cat cant even count lines or bars WTF??
 
Old 11-21-04, 02:44 PM   #21
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vote godz angel ..

Her punches weren't hard to understand .. and Spinn's verses had like a 1 line diss soo that makes it 50/50 odds of dissin her
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Old 11-21-04, 08:15 PM   #22
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LMAO..

i just noticed i didn't have a 5..LMAO....

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Old 11-22-04, 06:46 AM   #23
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ill verse gods angel. likin it!

wanna see the votes
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Old 11-22-04, 06:55 AM   #24
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Old 11-22-04, 03:49 PM   #25
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Old 11-22-04, 04:14 PM   #26
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Voted For: spinn

So, What is up "spinn" I should thank you now for giving me a win,
You are back now, your ass is now my working station, Welcome in,
You have real bad skills I admit, No please, Dont shit, Just Quit it,
Leave this place before I leave you "Spinnin", And leave me winnin.
^^^^^^^^ NO PUNCHES EFFECT AT ALL


You wont be grinnin, You will be sad, Tell ya mom, IT WAS DAD!
Afraid of me to murk your mom like Nelly Walking out on Chad.
I will Drill the spinn motion to show you the pain of a real Spinna,
I am god Not his angel, I wil kill you, You a whack Shit Sinner.
^^^^^^^^^^^^ DIS PART U HAD FLOW BUT DEM PUNCHES WERE WACK HOMIE NEEDS TO ELEVATE




GODSANGEL- AIIIIGHT YO PUNCHES NEED ALOT OF WORK NEEDS CREATIVITY NEEDS PERSONALS






1-I’ll sticc a FORK through “Angel” so she can really feel the breeze//
2-Have wonna-be "GODZ" hated by many.like the taste of "blacc-eyed-peas"//


3-I called u out so do wut u do, like the “Baccstreet Boys” you’ll be left blacc & blue//

4-Listen chicc you’s a fake wit “jet-lag” cuz ya rhymes r weary’R than mine(jetlag=weary)

&^^^^^^^^^^^ MADE AN LIL EFFECT ON IT U HAD WORDPLAY DATS GOOD DISS ABOUT HIS NAME DATS AN PERSONAL


6-You could spit fast or slow & ya rhymes will always blow//
7-I wont even holla @ you girl..cuz I don’t spit at hoes//

8- You can’t think “off the top” like pigs with their cerebrum still intact//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT DISSING HIS GIRL THATS AN PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH DISSING HIS RHYMES DATS AN PUNCH NICE



SPINN- U HAD AN AIIIIGHT VERSE U HAD PUNCHES THAT ACTUALLY EFFECTED BUT ELEVATE WHILE U ON THAT ROAD AIGHT BE CREATIVE MAKE SOME ADJUSTMENT ON YO STRTURE

OVERALL= AIIIGHT DIS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE

GODSANGEL- U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES EFFETIVE U HAD FLOW BUT DEM PUNCHES WERE WACK U WASNT EVEN TRYING


SPINN- U HAD PUNCHES THAT EFFECTED THAT LAST 2 6 & 7 U HAD PUNCHES AND DA LINE 4 IT WAS AN WORDPLAY


VOTE-SPINN FOR ACTUALLY TRYING HIS PUNCHES WERE MORE EFFECTIVE

GODS ANGEL- YOURS WAS NOT CHA PUNCHES WASNT EFFECTIVE
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Old 11-22-04, 07:41 PM   #27
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Old 11-23-04, 06:48 AM   #28
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Old 11-23-04, 09:37 AM   #29
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Both Were Pretty Weak. Godz Angel You Won It Though. Word
 
Old 11-23-04, 04:44 PM   #30
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Pretty weak battle actually...

spinn: fix your structure! 1-2 was pretty lame, 3 was something i guess,4 was quite decent i suppose,6-7 was so played and 8 was okay. You need more hardhitting personals and punches, up your vocab and wordplay and fix that structure!

- Gødz Ångël - : 1-2 was decent intro, 3-4 don't use the same punch again, you already had the "spin" and "win" thing.5-6, my favo lines of ya verse, they were all right. 7-8: played.Personals and punches can use some work, your structure and flow is good but improve your vocab and wordplay it's a little too basic...

Vote goes to - Gødz Ångël -

(no hating btw, just trying to help...)
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