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*Zeus* 5 62.50%
Kwell 3 37.50%
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Old 11-24-04, 03:46 AM   #1
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Old 11-24-04, 04:39 AM   #2
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Voted For: *Zeus*

This Battle Was Hott. Close Right Down To The Key Lines..

And The Reason I Voted Zues Was This..

Kid's Trying To Be Allan Iverson???......How Is That When I'm The Anwser???


Nice..

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Old 11-24-04, 04:40 AM   #3
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Old 11-24-04, 05:16 PM   #4
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Upping THis.........................................
 
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Old 11-25-04, 01:36 AM   #6
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Voted For: *Zeus*

zues takes this let me brake it down
flow zues
multi zues
punches zues
wordplay kwelli
meat4 zues
ioener and closer zues

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Old 11-25-04, 06:35 AM   #7
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Old 11-25-04, 09:28 AM   #8
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Voted For: *Zeus*

Both verses very good. Tough call.

open: cin: "Dam This Kid Keep Yapping Somebody Please Kwell(Quell)Him,
He Dug His Hole Around Rap Verse So Deep This Dumb ass Fell In" -Nice opening. Both opening were good, and entertaining but cin's hit harder.

close:kwell:"u need assistance wit this rap shit, while i fry u like dead fish
cuz u'll never polish ya shit on ya own, like a genie widda deathwish". I did like cin's close, pressing "SEND", was good but kwell's use of metaphor took it and the rhyming was dope.

cin's best line:"You've Bin Infected By Me Like White Blood Cells,I'll Coz You Cancer........
Kid's Trying To Be Allan Iverson???......How Is That When I'm The Anwser???" very nice. Good use of knowledge about white blood cells. Tasty line that.

Kwell's: "i'ma make my style like rough toilet paper, wit my lyrics hated
and win by applyin myself, jus to leave this asshole irritated"
-Fucking sweet! not much more to say

All in all, Kwell's verse was real goos, a good amount of meta's and good punches.
But cincantus' verse had the harder and better punches, that is mainly wat won it. His structure and flow were ill too.

Well done both of you. I hope i can get as good as either of the two of you.
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Old 11-25-04, 04:39 PM   #9
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Thanks For The Vote Kid....Upping This Shit..........
 
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Old 11-26-04, 07:38 PM   #12
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Voted For: *Zeus*

cincanatus or w/e barely won this neither verse was very hot at all. Kwell's verse was pretty basic and lacked creativity, and Cincanatus' verse seemed to b more like a ramble at the end than a good verse. it really wasn't easy to follow, but since kwell didnt come as hard with punches or personals im goin with cincanatus.
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Old 11-27-04, 09:28 PM   #15
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shit.... both had tight rythmes, but the multis - personals - and crazy word play of kwell got me hooked... both had good drops... but definately gotta give me vote to

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