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| Poseidon |
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5 | 71.43% |
| X-Spitty |
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2 | 28.57% |
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Hell yeah
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IP:
god fucking dammit fucking uppin on this fucking shit!!!!!!!
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Only the Illist
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This was feedback posted for Poseidon
IP:
aight yall this was a lopsided battle...
both of yall could have done better but my homie poseidon took this one... X u my dawg too from when i was wit da rip and shit but ya need to work on ya flow, ya rhyme scheeme and all that shit, hit me up in pm and ill take a look at some of ya shit and help ya out X.... any way good verse Poseidon, flowed very well and punches and personals hit... you won this one easy... no hate X |
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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IP:
Voted For: X-Spitty
Posidon -Your full of more shit than a toilet Spitty You Rep Da RIP dats a good choice for you Cause you dont have any talent and its what youll be doin soon -That Fucked You Up Because You Had Nothin To Rhyme With Soon Doesnt Rhyme With You .. But Your Verse Wass IIght NOt To Hot.Okay X-Spitty- You Had A better Flow Scheme Everything Structure was a lil strectched at some poitns but everything flowed right togreahter nice verse.Im have to give this to you homie.-1 -1 Overall Vote- X-Spitty Return the Favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161948 |
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Watering You Down...
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IP:
aight well thanks for the feed............
any more votes?
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Banned: Biting
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This was feedback posted for Poseidon
IP:
.....Yo Hands Down I Say Poseidon Had This Battle Lines Was Tight Some Stretch Lines Though But It Was Good With Vocab And Shit Good Shit
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'Member Those Golden Days
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IP:
Voted For: Poseidon
god squad vs. RIP punches- Poseidon had more and they hit harder personals- Tie both had em equal multis- X i spose cuz u had more of em metas- Poseidon overall just better structure- Tie, both were off wordplay- Tie, both had one and really both kinda weak flow- Poseidon's flowed better overall humor- Tie Poseidon aight drop. Work on better personals, word play, punches, multis, and structure. also be sure to have good openers and closures. X rhymin wuz off and wuz hard to follow. also work on wp, punches, multis, and structure. No Hate Just An Honest Voter. v/Poseidon pz |
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New to RB
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This was feedback posted for Poseidon
IP:
yo, poseidon threw it down man. it flowed nicely wit good word choice. i like da fact you threw in dat he was canadian man, way to use it to ur advantage. you did that shit hands down you got dat battle
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*It's About Time RapVerse Got A New Generation Of ReInforcements***Aiming On My Next Target*
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IP:
Voted For: Poseidon
...Don...: Verse Was Tight....Your Personals Was In There And Was Hitting Hard...Punchlines Was Cold As Fuck And Wordplay Was Cool....Vocabulary Was Decent But Structure Was Lop Sided X Spitty: Your Structure Was Fucked Vocabulary Was Basic Nu Punches Personals Wasnt Even Feeling Your Whole Verse Was Terrible You Need To Up Your Vocab Coz Over All Weak Battle :ThumbDown: v/Poseidon |
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Lyrical Prosperity
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This was feedback posted for Poseidon
IP:
checking your shit out man..... ELEVATE!
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Hell yeah
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IP:
good battle man....ill elevate for sure...........
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Watering You Down...
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IP:
lets get some more votes up in here...............
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Watering You Down...
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IP:
uppin for some more votes up in here..............
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Hell yeah
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IP:
comeon come on....................................
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Watering You Down...
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IP:
god damn people dont sleep on this......lets get some more votes....
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Watering You Down...
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IP:
wow, cmon now people lets get some votes in here....
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