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| View Poll Results: Mentally Ill VS DrasticMeasureZ | |||
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1 | 16.67% |
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5 | 83.33% |
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11-22-04, 11:04 PM
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IP: A59C 8706
actually i dont have any battles on my sig.... so.... christmas is coming... be good
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11-22-04, 11:45 PM
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This was feedback posted for Mentally Ill
IP: F2A1 41C4
just check'in the poll N how V.T newest member is doing so-far...................................
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11-23-04, 12:36 AM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: 02C5 0D6C
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe-- dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes-- (weak ass line...5/10) those multis you should use, or at least try thinkin fool-- draz beatin me? he pulled it off.. of his list of things to do-- (weak, way played, no creativity, 5/10) you couldn't possibly defeat me, ur rap tools weaker-- cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers-- (i know wat u mean, but weak and no flow, 5/10) plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug-- fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood-- (decent puch for a NEWB, 4/10) you've been postin shit lately-beat me thats crazy-- I'ma take u out-cuz i don't need a playbook to play D-- (last and best line...but isnt creative...6/10) yo man, u need 2 elevate if you want to run wit guys like drastic...work on punches, creativity, wordplay, and for god sakes, battle people who arent as good.... YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it) (decent opener, could be better, 7/10) Ya punches aint hitting me cause ur writing on an soft pad My rhymes are like an sharp scissor I’ll excrete ya rhymes to scrap (nice bar, good wordplay, and creativity, and metas, 8/10) Kid says he’z mentally ill couldn’t be ill if u took so many pills Calla me an quick sand cause iam leavin ya under with yo skillz (str8 up decent punch, creative, connects and hits 9/10) If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst) My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art (feelin that one, 9/10) Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine (feelin that as well, ecept it doesnt flow right...8/10) drastic your verse was weak compared 2 the shit ive seen you do, so i guess stay elevated, dont let up on shit, and stay str8 up fire...you used good wordplay in ure verse, the punches were all decent, and the flow was ok...the structure seemed a lil bit off tho...vote drastic...
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11-23-04, 01:12 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
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i was doin good, then they took a couple votes from me. but i guess it's goin aight
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11-23-04, 02:38 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
IP: YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it) Ya punches aint hitting me cause ur writing on an soft pad My rhymes are like an sharp scissor I’ll excrete ya rhymes to scrap Kid says he’z mentally ill couldn’t be ill if u took so many pills Calla me an quick sand cause iam leavin ya under with yo skillz If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst) My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine 6/10 Not Very Good Verse By DrasticMeasureZ Shit Kinda Feel off at the end and bar 2 and 5 din't even rhyme ------------------------------------------------------------ fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe-- dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes-- those multis you should use, or at least try thinkin fool-- draz beatin me? he pulled it off.. of his list of things to do-- you couldn't possibly defeat me, ur rap tools weaker-- cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers-- plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug-- fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood-- you've been postin shit lately-beat me thats crazy-- I'ma take u out-cuz i don't need a playbook to play D-- 5/10 And Mentally Ill you spit was more basic than DrasticMeasureZ spit But your flow was better Work on comin in wit a stronger verse and get big on vocab
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11-23-04, 04:50 PM
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IP: 183F 8D72
Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe-- dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes-- ^very nice opener, but that was basically it.. you started to fall over within your verse.. u had sum decent punches, BUt u didn't come hard enuff my opinion.. DMZ i wasn't feeling ur first bar, u coulda worded that better, the parentheses shit ain't kickin' it, but it was minor, so it didn't have a huge effect on your verse.. i don't like how u used the same word in one line "ill"-his name, couldn't be "ill".. blah but not bad.. the starburst bar was kinda funny, lmfao, with the line using his blood to creat art.. ur last bar didn't rhyme, lol, however u had hard the harder punches in this battle that's why i think u won this one.. ur structure was better sumwhat.. vocab wayy better than mentally ill's only thing is ur choice of rhymin' words, and ur flow sumwhat.. good luck, u won this one..
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