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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Blackwell 5 83.33%
Hammer 1 16.67%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 12-06-04, 06:16 AM   #1
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uppin for honest votes. Will return the favour.........................................
 
Old 11-24-04, 01:48 PM   #2
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ok ite cool man if ya need any voting just get at me
 
Old 11-24-04, 03:49 PM   #3
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This was feedback posted for blackwell

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i give props to blackwell his puchlines were beter hammer could have gotten dis feback if the first few lines wernt lame
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Old 11-24-04, 08:32 PM   #4
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fair enough.......................

matter of opinion that
 
Old 12-06-04, 06:18 AM   #5
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Voted For: blackwell

Ayo he's gets grilled everytime so thats y he cums fried
i dun need ta tie knots in his tounge...as his record got him tounge-tied

^^blackwell that was good
but this battle was pretty weak but black well made more sense then hammer what does christmas have to do wit blackwell
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Old 12-06-04, 06:21 AM   #6
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It was an ok battle now i think bout it because hammer did have funni lines too but blackwell was just overall better wit personals and thats what won him this match
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Old 12-06-04, 09:54 AM   #7
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Voted For: blackwell

HAMMER

I couldn’t scratch a sketch, he’s ugly as sasquatch
I saw mickey mouse wearing a blackwell wristwatch
(WEAK OPENER, BUT FUNNY, AND THE FLOW WAS OFF...5/10)

what other way you in this, I wont let you feel excluded
He gets batteries for Christmas with “toys not included”
(LMMFAO....BEST BAR OF YOUR VERSE...YOU STR8 UP DISSED HIM ON THIS ONE...LMAO...9/10)

Couldn’t wait all week for a piece of Blackwell critique
indeed hes bleak, not unique, silly rhymes are antique.
(UMM DECENT I GUESS...WEAK FLOW, BUT GOOD USE OF VOCAB...6/10)

An ugly lonely guy, tries for pussy and gets a very rare bit
Except from all the groupies, come with puncture repair kits!
(WEAK CLOSER...IF YOU REWORDED THAT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN FIRE...FOR EXAMPLE...

HE TRIES FOR PUSSY WHEN HE AN UGLY BITCH SO HE IS GETTIN A RARE BIT//
TALKIN SHIT, FUCKIN GOUPIES WHOS PUSSIES COULDN’T BE REPAIRED WITH FLAT TIRE KITS//

YOU WOULD HAVE KILLED HIM IF IT WAS SOMETHING LIKE THAT...


BLACKWELL

Ayo he's gets grilled everytime so thats y he cums fried
i dun need ta tie knots in his tounge...as his record got him tounge-tied
(DECENT OPENER, NICE FLOW...7/10)

n talking bout his record......his wins are neal
u obviusly aint hot so y does ya sig represent springville
(DECENT PUNCH AND FLOW WAS OK...COULD BE BETTER...6/10)

Ya rhymes aint shit so i guess u got da rite ta fuss
thinks his a gangster but his prolly like his sig..drives a bus
(NICE BAR HERE...DECENT PUNCH ON HIS SIG...7/10)

Only lunatics could claim that ya raps are ill
this like confused buisnessmen as ya gunna loose n thats the deal
(PLAYED OUT...IF REWORDED IT COULD WORK...5/10)

N I'd probaly cry wit laughter if i saw u in a bandanah
u aint as hards as nails.......so y call yaself hammer?
(DECENT CLOSER...NICE DISS ON HIS NAME...GOOD PUNCH WITH THE HARD AS NAILS...WORD PLAY IS WEAK, AND FLOW IS OK...7/10)

AIGHT MAYNE...YOU VERSE WASNT BAD, BUT YO...YOU NEED TO FULLY TYPE YOUR WORDS...DONT HALF ASS SHIT...TRY NOT TO SLANG YOUR SHIT, BECAUSE NOT EVERYONE CAN FLOW IT...WE ARE THE ONES VOTING SO FIX THAT...IT ALSO MAKES IT CONFUSING TO READ, AND YOU HAVE TO READ 2 TIMES TO UNDERSTAND...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS OKAY...COULD WORK ON THAT SOME...YOU HAD DECENT PUNCHES, PERSONALS, SOME MULTIE USE, AND THE WORD PLAY NEEDS TO BE ELEVATED...BE MORE CREATIVE AND YOU WILL DO GOOD...SO YOU GET MY VOTE...

VOTE/BLACKWELL

RETURN THE VOTE IN MY BATTLE AGAINTS LIL CHUBBS...LINK IN THE SIG...~1~
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Old 12-23-04, 04:42 AM   #8
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::::::::::::::uppin for some real votes that dont stink of shit::::::::::::::::::
 
Old 12-28-04, 02:52 PM   #9
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Voted For: blackwell

here is my honest vote

flow black
personals black
hits black
imagry black
opner-closer tie
vocab tie

over all black and hey leave some honest votes on my link peace.
 
Old 12-30-04, 01:13 PM   #10
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Voted For: blackwell

both seriously need to elevate... but my votes goes to blackwell on decent punches, personals, and structure...

Ya flow was easier to read... so parts didn't make sense but overall you delivered a good drop
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