Voted For: lilchiofthachi

yeh gotta give it to chi he had the overall better verse punches flow everything jp was weak..............see me when you see me niggaz

v/chi

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Voted For: JpMoNeY06

yo vote has 2 go 2 money here.......structure wack........flow good punches awesome shit......CHI ur gay ur wack get the fuk outta this site aiight..... money took this cuz of punches good opener.....and overall good shit lack of mulites......but good shit...........dope shit.......chi u lacked evrythin.....wack punches......nuff said......yo return the favour in my battle below against me and diplosive...aiight reurrn the favour

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Voted For: JpMoNeY06

Good battle in my eyes. breaks down like this:

JpMoNeY06: Your structure was totally fucked up man. It took me a little while to readit but once i got used to it i liked it defo. Some nice ounces and your flow was real good. Some good personals in this two. -The best advice you can get right now is press return wen you finish a line and start a new line. Peeps wont be voting for you cos some gon be too lazy to read ya shit man. -Kay bro hope that helps ya.

best bar: drop a verse like it ain't nuttin/
bitches like you r why they made up the word FRONTIN
-This was a cool bar, there was more but i liked this loads.


Chi: Was ok man, seemed a lot more basic than ive seen of you tho. vocab was ok but could have been better. Punches were ok but could have definately come harder. Structure was good and flow was aight.

best bar:"This nigga jacks off 2 gay porn on da internet,
poor nigga all his shit at home is a renter set/"
-Cool, some might think its primitive but i liked it.

Stay up peeps.

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Voted For: lilchiofthachi

you both suck... read tutorials and learn about wordplay... but im goin here because his structure was easier to read, and he didn't talk about himself as much.

rule #1
dont say your ganna win in a battle
#2
dont say i got flow i got skill, shit like that. self glorification is gay.
#3
and yo cats learn wordplay and personals, neither of ya'll had either, if one of you had just one line of worplay personal, i'd vote for you. incase you dont know what it is........ here an example
on jpmoney...
you a poser this cat aint got no flow, when he says so its funny
cuz when you say u makin papper stacks... its with (J)ust (p)lay money

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