Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Legend:
I’ll play your wack ass like the GTA series and triumph every single time
You so wack and weak you have a hard time putting punches in your lines
Ironic, since you didn't have a punch in here, weak opener
You get hammered by every emcee and then your bitch ass just resigns
That’s your story^ and you decline the offer to elevate you rapping is a crime
1. you suck 2. you dick ride 3. you’re a poser 4. on your way out follow the signs
2nd and 3rd lies were quite stretched, no punches anywhere
your never gonna be on the top and you’ll always be named a poor loser
your wack and you bite off of niggaz and mutha fucka I’m your accuser
me winning this battle is expected and I with your raps you’re a pathetic amuser
Blah, wack...
watch out because theres no one else that can prove that you will always be wack
leave the game of rap and no one wants to see your faggot ass come back
Closer = weak, you need to put a punch in your closer. You structure was wack too, keep your rhyme for either 2 lines or 4, NOT 3.

.:Jack Rackam:.:
No need to be strapped wit a gat, ill collapse ya rap by way of an asthma attack
…………Applaud my verse n pat my back…n you still would'nt be clappin back..!
Nice opener, good use of multis
When well wacks learn, ya steady losin as I degut ya insides from hands to stern..
this herb peaks in stack of ferns, steel his lite so he can be Jack’d-on-land-n-earn’d,
A little stretched, but still worked well, punch was aight. Good wordplay.
A Doctern of Inoculations comin at you like ancient civilizations ta ruin ya health,
U a star? Cuz ya screwin yaself, face facts your wack like board-books on shelves,
More good wordplay, punch was aight.
Work at the post office?. Cuz im rippin this mail (male) like I murderin next(necks)
Give’em weed packed guns n this kid still couldn’t pop-off a dope case of text,(techs)
Wow...
Im bored with this member, he knows im better n I aint even lost my fuckin temper,
straight up use.. W i d e l e t t e r s ..cuz you don’t tear shit up like d/ridin contenders,
Another good punch, damn...
Respect im telling, like misprints this legend’s shit is similar to defective sell’ins,
Ill squash his melon, cuz in this run ya never getting a vote like convicted felons..
Nice closer, good use of multis consistently throughout your verse. I feel a KO comin'...

Winner: Jack Rackam, just performed better in all aspects of rhyming...

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