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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Blockade 1 16.67%
Un'Touched 5 83.33%
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Old 11-26-04, 01:58 PM   #1
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: Un'Touched

You never been off the hook, he's like bad Apollo acts and a phone with no ringer up..
You need help. Here's a single finger salute, now you've been finger fucked..
nice closer
I've heard better punchlines in a gospel chorus, "We no threat. Even the cops ignore us.."
The vocab bores us. Your whole verse is screaming, "What the fuck is a thesaurus.."
nice punch
Your flow is piss poor, your punches miss more than pissed whores with wrist sores..
Cause in this war, assist in the midst of my win storm is the only reason you exist for..
…decent closer


First appearance to me was funny.. knowing you wont do shit
& your avy was the hotness.. back when the RB vet used it*
okay
You know your wack as fuck.. no chance of ever claimin fame
Wit the delivery of my punches.. your visions blurred like yah name
heh no
Un'Touched no more, feel violated from the hits.. cant escape them
I aint to the Madonna like a virgin.. so i just raped him!
okay

[b]Overall

Un’Touched took this one wit ease
Had harder punches…a nice structure
And a nice flow to it…

*RTF*
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Old 11-27-04, 03:37 AM   #2
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Voted For: Un'Touched

You Verse Had Better Punches And Multies.. Thats Why I Voted For You..

Blockade You Verse Started Out Nice With The Personal, But You SHould Have Added A Hott Punch Here And There. Plus Your Finisher Was Horrible..
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Old 11-27-04, 11:20 AM   #3
Un'Touched
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Iight Uppin this shit
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Old 11-27-04, 11:35 AM   #4
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Voted For: Un'Touched

Both come nice in this battle,... Un'T had the better
verse started a bit slow but killed it in the final few
bars.

Block come nice as we but I didn't realy think he had.

Overall Un't come hott and won this batte with nice flow
decent vocab and better punches...

Vote ~ Un'T
the punches.. I did like...
You know your wack as fuck.. no chance of ever claimin fame
Wit the delivery of my punches.. your visions blurred like yah name
^Nice bar man...good personal but thats all you really
come with I though.
 
 


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