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Retro 3 37.50%
Premanition 5 62.50%
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Old 11-29-04, 03:12 AM   #1
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uppin

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Old 11-29-04, 05:56 AM   #2
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yeah yeah my brothers of that cool rapping skill.what im saying is mad talent ,you got me too listen.
 
Old 11-29-04, 06:06 AM   #3
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good luck, nice battle..........................................
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Old 11-29-04, 12:08 PM   #4
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Voted For: Premanition

v/ Premanition
this was a good battle yo....both emcees came good...but, prem got this one..his punches hit a lil harder than Retro's....Retro had some good personals, tho....Both flowed well and all... I would lyke to see a lil more creativety on both sides....But, Premanition punched thoroghly and hit retro precisely....so he gets my vote....take it or leave it...
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Old 11-29-04, 12:58 PM   #5
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Voted For: Retro

retro hit harder in this one deff more superb vocab u used a couple good metas and ur flow was better structure was good keep uppin i think u couldve done better but u came out on top cuz premonition used some wack vocab but w/e man u came out on top
check out my battle with weedex

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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


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Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

Reppinn...................Retro-Bution.................
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Old 11-29-04, 12:59 PM   #6
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Soz That Has To Be Deleted Cos Your'e In My Crew ....prem Delete It...^
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Old 11-29-04, 01:24 PM   #7
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Aiight,

Prem:
Ur record causes ‘Outbreak’, with a fake deceiving balance…
Took time to seek ur skill, but its clear u got ‘hidden’ talents…
Nice opener, pretty dope punch aswell[/b
Ur Wack at text, lol just tell peeps you need a beat to rhyme…
N ur crews a joke…
…………..only ‘close’ to dope wen it fell at the feet of mine…(*)
[b]thats dope, nice personal and good punch

Accepting this battle, bet you really wanna contest this time…
People really detest ur rhymes…
…………………………wanna win? you beta invest in mine…
Nice punch, pretty decent, a little stretched but structured well.
P.I.N.K? must be an identity crisis, worry bout ur mental stability…
Got topical ability? but bein slept on wherever like night versatility…
Nice closer, pretty much finished him off..

Retro:
This Battle Is A Definition Of Premanition Receivin' a Incision.
Callin' Me Out ? That Was Ya Last Action and Decision.
Thats pretty much stating the obvious, no real punch
You'd Kick Up a Controversey If You Claimed Yaself Dope.
Watch How This Kid Get's Washed Out Like Lil Kid's & Soap.
pretty good punch, could have been worded better
"The Meaning Of Life" Nigka You ain't Advanced Or Complex.
Shoulda Forseen That YOU were Gon Get Recked Next.=*=
lol, nice punch pretty decent man
Skewer Ya Spleen, Prem Set It Up But I Stole His Show.
Staple Ya Brain To Ya Cranium So You Can Be M.A.Torso.=*=
Nice closer, good wordplay.

Aiight Prem got this really, Word of advice for Retro, big words, multiple times, don't make the verse, just looks wierd now.....

Word, hit up my Xclusive battle, I'm bout to up it in EFL
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