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Terse 5 83.33%
Elusiv G 1 16.67%
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Old 12-01-04, 06:08 AM   #1
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First Off Good Job To Both On This Battle this is my breakdown since i cant vote yet.. 250 post thing...

Elusiv G:
U rhymes are weak, why waste ur last breaths and bother 2 speak
I'll merk u easily, like Tony Montana u betta not be talkin 2 me//
You Started out nice, but i wasnt feeling the montana line
Your only win came cos Fredpimpstone didnt show
U aint got skills, ur win record is already @ its highest plateau//
OUch Ouch OUch,, great personal and punch
Like G-Unit signin sum1 like Chingy whos simply commercial
U winnin a battle eva again is an idea truly controversial//
LOL, nice
Im learnin gradually, makin rhymin n beatin ma expertise
Ur ass so stupid still askin mama bout wats the "birds and tha bees"//
Eeh not a good, really filler wack punch
Tearse go home, disperse, return once uve rehearsed
Ill hit ur newbie ass, make u bleed, like a virgin on her first//
Alright hard hitting, good closer..

Elusive G:
Your Verse Hit Hard, Expecially the stand out personal..
some lines were filler, but it was an all around good verse..


Terse:
I laugh at u son, cuz u think u prepared ta' spit
but u wouldnt spit raw if u ate sushi widda hair in it
that was really wack man, no offense
in terms of talent, we can never be called equal
Elusiv's nice...but only cuz money's the root of all evil
pretty good line, im kinda feelin it
dont lie to yourself, u aint a real G that came ta' merk
shit, if u quit playin mind games, then maybe ya brain'll work
eh alright
ya rhymes is ass...lemme show u how you're surpassed jack
puttin ya verse in uppercase, will only leave ya ASS CAPPED
Lol Alright good line
this battle's no where near close, EG's been ravaged to strips
even if this was down to the wire, this clumsy faggot would trip
lol ok good closer

Terse:
Alright Man Good Verse, You Had Some Hard Hitting Lines, ANd Good Wordplay, Some Lines Like Yur Opener was really filler.. but all around a good verse..



<<< BREAKDOWN >>>

This Battle Was Dead Even From Both Verses, So I Had To Turn To The Best Line Of The Battle.. And Elusiv G got my Vote With..

Your only win came cos Fredpimpstone didnt show
U aint got skills, ur win record is already @ its highest plateau//


^^ Great Personal And PUnch, Best Line OF The Battle..

Vote in my battle gainst 4fil if you want..
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Old 12-01-04, 11:08 AM   #2
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Old 12-01-04, 03:34 PM   #3
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Old 12-01-04, 05:40 PM   #4
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Old 12-01-04, 06:51 PM   #5
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Old 12-01-04, 06:56 PM   #6
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Voted For: Elusiv G

yo this be the the break down really it all g on this shit but here it is anyway:

Flow g
style g
vocab g
punches g
personnals g
opener terse
closer g
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Old 12-02-04, 02:26 AM   #7
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Old 12-02-04, 09:10 AM   #8
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Old 12-02-04, 12:30 PM   #9
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Old 12-02-04, 04:20 PM   #10
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Old 12-02-04, 07:39 PM   #11
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Old 12-03-04, 02:02 AM   #12
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Old 12-03-04, 05:22 AM   #13
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Voted For: Terse

I think that Terse got this battle because i feel that Terse came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Terse got it they were used effectifely and were on point Elusiv G u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Terse good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Terse and flow and structure i'll give to Terse.

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Old 12-03-04, 09:19 AM   #14
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Old 12-03-04, 01:42 PM   #15
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