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View Poll Results: NeptuneHurricane \/ Rambo | |||
Rambo | 4 | 44.44% | |
NeptuneHurricane | 5 | 55.56% | |
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12-02-04, 06:36 PM | #16 |
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IP: 8C23 CA6B
hahaha nice pm man rambo u funny as hell if u wanna battle set it up mayne
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12-02-04, 10:58 PM | #17 |
Resident Jolly Green Giant
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IP: F7E2 7DC2
Ok..........
Uppin. Come on ppl just put this one away. Sheesh.
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12-04-04, 08:38 PM | #18 |
Resident Jolly Green Giant
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IP: D6CE 7EF1
Ok. What the fuck? Uppin. Can we plz get some more votes? holy crap....
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12-05-04, 04:21 PM | #19 |
Resident Jolly Green Giant
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IP: D6CE 7EF1
Uppin.
omg. someone plz vote
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12-05-04, 04:57 PM | #20 | |
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IP: E7AF 9196
Voted For: Rambo
My vote is for Neptunes. Ya punches were kinda good, but the strcuture was a lil off. I can tell that you rap fast, but this is a text battle, and you may have to switch it up a lil. Rambo, ya structure was decent, but you gotta step it up. Ya punches were decent at best, and ya personals weren't half way decent. You really gotta step it up. My vote is for Neptunes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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12-06-04, 08:36 PM | #21 |
Resident Jolly Green Giant
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IP: D6CE 7EF1
Goddamnit dood. You gotta vote under the verse that you want to vote for. Holy shit, people need to learn how to do this. Is there a mod that could fix this plz?
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12-07-04, 08:14 PM | #22 |
Resident Jolly Green Giant
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IP: F7E2 7DC2
Uppin so hopefully a mod can see. and ppl need to vote. Correctly this time.
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12-07-04, 09:10 PM | #23 | |
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This was feedback posted for Rambo
IP: DEB2 BDC7
checking this shito out............................................... ....
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12-10-04, 06:10 PM | #24 | |
New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Rambo
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to NEPTUNE flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, RAMBO had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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01-22-05, 01:55 PM | #25 |
Resident Jolly Green Giant
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IP: F7E2 7DC2
Uppin, this shit has been going forever. Plz somebody just vote and finish this!
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01-22-05, 02:58 PM | #26 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: FD9F 447B
Voted For: Rambo
Voted for Rambo Gave this one to Rambo but not easily i liked both real good but I found Neptunes punches a lil humerous and not hard i mean i laughed after i read some of them but wit Rambo i was like whoah so everything else was good flow was a lil more easier to read on Rambos as well Good Battle to Both take a look at my battles n hook me up on my battles or sumtin! |
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01-24-05, 09:45 AM | #27 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: NeptuneHurricane
opener: neptune hurricane vocab: nept structure: rambo punches: nept multis: nept overall: nept neptune gets my vote |
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01-26-05, 09:20 PM | #28 |
Resident Jolly Green Giant
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IP: F7E2 7DC2
Uppin.
If someone would finish this up, we could move on. This battle is so old. People is sleepin.
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02-01-05, 11:05 PM | #29 |
I walk & walk over you
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IP: B209 6EDC
Voted For: NeptuneHurricane
Nept- Punches was ok, flow was fucked......Strucuture is fucked......Punches though was ok....i like the closer...aint nohting to say about your verse, except elevate on structure. rambo- Punches was ok , still need elevation, flowed pretty nice...aint nothing much to say overall=This battle was weak, Rambo you flowed an pretty good verse, punches was ok...keep doing ya thang, add multi'z next time. Nept you had an pretty bad flow, punches on the other hand (the closer) was nice. Rambo sorry fam but nept closer beat you. You had some fillers in your verse saying "partna" the same time. Punches was ok,nept punches was hard hitting and effective (the closer)
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02-01-05, 11:45 PM | #30 | |
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IP: 7ADD 6459
Voted For: Rambo
Rambo dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its mad newbish.. structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. wordplay was decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. NeptuneHurricane dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its mad newbish.. ur structure is very inconsistent.. flow falls off due to the inconsistency.. u had a few multis.. wordplay is weak.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. Overall NeptuneHurricane had more multis.. neither had good personals.. Rambo had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Rambo gets my vote.. VOTE - RAMBO |
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