RapVerse.com Community - Empty Bottles(Taste My Medicine Finale)

12-05-04, 03:03 AM

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thanx may'n....this was sumtin i did a while back....i did different parts...then i made a last part and put em all together....believe me...my structure better...thanx for the feed

uppin..........

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12-07-04, 09:03 PM

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holy shit......3rd page.....lets move this back shall we

upin folkz.............

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12-07-04, 10:40 PM

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this was a nice solid piece...ur flow was kinda off but other than that...this was a solid drop...7/10

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12-09-04, 09:06 PM

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This thread is old....but i still want feedback.....biatch

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12-09-04, 09:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Ill.Logic

So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards,
crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers,
who feels my power?duplicate of a legend eatin pussies speech up so watch your words get devoured,
inside ya minds, like i commited a mental crime,make ya hearts sublime,
pace myself, so "watch" S.A. throw ya body into "clocks" just to show you a waste a "time",
killin herbs, destroyin ya wordz, your verse has beenn corrupted,
cuz my shits blazin like Mt.Vesuvius just erupted,
what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies,
High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys,
drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?,
muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES",
so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this,
cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST",
"O Lord!S.A.,you are killin em my friend,
please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again",
verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled,
like my style?only givin it to you mild,
cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD",
remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me,
Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE",
Fracture-Skulls,Bury-Souls,And Then Leave No Witness,
Told U Im Not To Mess Wit,2x4 Did And R.I.P.'s Outta Business,
Cntinue To Yap,Just Go With That,Just Kill You In My Raps,
Know-The-Facts, "Knock Down Ya Back" So Ya "Spine-Collapse",
Taste-My-Feeling,A Supreme Human-Being,
S.A.'s That Godd,Kill Ya Body So Maybe Your Death Is Worth Seeing,(get it?)
Peeps Feelin Me Everywhere,Step To Me And Get Shown Up,
Cuz I Got More People Sayin Esey(S.A.) Then Mexicans Packed In A Truck,
I-Spark-This,Rapture Yall Hearts And Then Leave Ya In Darkness,
And Let Ya Internal Organs Decease As I Feed Upon Your Carcas,(eewww....)

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nevermind what i had fuck it............

Last edited by intensify effect : 12-09-04 at 10:14 PM.

12-09-04, 10:50 PM

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drop feed back on my oepn mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164865

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