Voted For: Mark Greyson

this battle is basically one sided. elsuiv u had a decent structure but that was pretty much it. not many punches that stood at to me. pretty basic shit. elevate and work on creativity in ya verse. ya vocab needs brushin up on too.
mark, or should i say avalon? structure was nice...u had some ok punches nad then some prett dope ones too. the water one made me chuckle...and the opener was pretty dope too.


v/mark

Somebody close this battle so I can battle Elusiv G

Voted For: Elusiv G

Mark:
RV knows you’re a clown, just some fuckin british punk
dopeness speaks for itself… n' told you to shut the fuck up…
3/10

ya structures shitty… and I’ll show you what worse is,
shoot holes in ya body, like the ones you have in ya verses…
4/10

in less than 10 lines sure ‘nough Mark’ll beat a chick down,
since Elusive eluded himself to girl faster than Spanish nouns…
2/10?

leave you soaked in piss n’ blood.. don’t move or budge,
Elusive… can’t hold his water so how can he hold a grudge..?
2/10?

right now is the time in which we call you a homeless bitch,
and ask about your kitchen…
..........................How'd you ever make a studio out of shit?
5/10

elusiv G:
Mark Greyson, man what the fuck is up wit ur rap name
Sounds like a pop singa, not a rappa, a pawn strivin 4 fame
6/10

If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass
They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class
7/10

It aint like ur rhymes make up 4 ur current "namely" position
Ur punches hit but they're weak, like ur firing blank ammunition
8/10

U aint got skills, u aint neva ate an Mc, ur dieing of malnutrition
Even wit RV international elevation aid, ull b needin physicianz
5/10

Ma rhymez are elevated, university level, i shud write a dissertation
ur rhymes r wack, we all know u didnt come close to graduation
6/10

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Voted For: Mark Greyson

O MY GOD!!!

this wasnt even close....lol av

you took this by far with punches personals, wordplay, fuck it
in ever cat......Elusive your opener was weak and so was the rest of your verse man wtf was this

If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass
They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class

^^ummm thats a wack attempt at a punch

Mark Greyson gets this with ease

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Voted For: Mark Greyson

Basically, this was over quite quickly.
I read elusiv's whole verse in complete daze at his whackness and i read mark's first bar and knew who had the win.
Elusiv, focus on PUNCHES rather than flow, structure, vocab or w/e the fuck you were trying to pull in that verse.
Mark, just ill yo.
Seems like you didnt try at all ( ) but your first bar killed anything he brought.Also the spanish nouns line was nice.

V/Mark

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1 to close it...

and Soc... I read your reply... and didn't even know what my first line was lol... *goes to reread verse*

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Voted For: Mark Greyson

Elusiv G: eh....not liking much......
1st bar was pretty whack... non-effective and played aswell BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! like a ghost....ummm 2nd bar was exactly like the first one same thing....3rd bar was too^. 4th bar was unoriginal seen it done many times....final bar was half self-glorified and plllaaaayed. anyways too much worthless plays on his name....overall: 4/10

Mark Greyson:......eh decent....
1st bar was atleast a personal....and pretty odd and played bar, not very effective....2nd bar was okay, liked the [ersonal a bit. 3rd bar was played. 4th bar was really irritating....and you spelled his name wrong. 5th bar was......... a decent closer to end this ish.....overall: 6.5/10

vote: Mark Greyson

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