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Supervillain 5 100.00%
WeeDex 0 0%
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Old 12-13-04, 05:27 AM   #1
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

weedex is a man of substance, active ingredients: doja n kleenex
u suggestin' i smoke u or wipe my ass wit ur corpse wen i clean it
^^ok opener,ok punch...
be my guest, speak them weak lies 'bout these elite guys on r.v's site
please try, we ridin' n comin' titer then ur acid washed bon jovi levi's
^^was'nt feeling it...worded bad n blah punch...
it looks like nows ur time 2 shine, but u blew it...2 bad ur truant
dead guys cant bring new life 2 this site, ur useless, othawise pruv it
^^meh ,filler
hemi-powered 'magnum' rappin'...faggot, u shouldve tried 2 'dodge' us
ya spinal colum da same color as skin of guys the dat drive hondas
^^^lol,nope,....
its tragic, this mans rap is comin up short like leprechaun boot buckles
only way u'd beat me 2 a punch is if u head butted this dudes knuckles
^^??...i got it but it was weak...
my impression?...if lifes a lesson, im bettin' u got a big fuckin red F
i wont let this kids dyslexia ruin my verse, so here...u-o-y k-c-u-f
^^funny but weak...
she found a cure 4 aids, 4got it...was engaged 2 bill gates, but flaked
and 2 this day...weedex the rejects still his mothers biggest mistake
^^bad closer...
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it started out half decent but fell off alot
as it continued...ya flow was ok overall...dropped a couple times..-_-....jus not a hard hittin verse,..
lacked good concepts n flow wasnt consistent...
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Watch me step the pace up a notch, and SV get dropped
It looks like hes no longer hot, like the rash on his nob-rot
Either his talents gone AWOL or my watch has just stopped.
^^3 lines..? n i wasnt feelin the punch..
My Sick Verse will destroy him and toy with him with no beat
Needs Prozac in the am, and Swallows Valium, to go to sleep
^^self glorification..no punch...
I aint hungry, not trying to be funny, but I can snap like elastic
And this Slimy Vermin practices his slapstick comedy of a spastic
^^no,...slimy vermin..lol
I bet he uses his lyrics to help Sleazy Vile politicians win elections
I never forget a face but for Super Villain I’l make an exception
^^weak....but ok
It’s a win coz your grammars got no glamour, its pointless like a hammer
you try to elevate and create something great but cant n just clam up!
wtf..nice setup n no punch..!
I shouldn’t say it, but his penis is so small, he has to fist the girls
Even funnier when he got laughed out of the GAY Mister World!
^^this sounds like a fake personal..
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using sv's initials repeativly in a battle seemed to be your focus,you lacked punches throughout ya verse,.....
ya closer was gay...i was'nt feelin any punches from ya
drop,..to be honest.......
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both had good structure
both had weak or no punches...
but sv had 1
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 12-16-04, 10:35 AM   #2
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^^^up...up......uppin' away!!!

the super duper...c.s.
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Old 12-17-04, 02:24 PM   #3
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ayo I say supervillain won this battle...dat's an honest vote!! yall

Im not sure how many punches or metas and personals or wordplay yall had because my mind is spinning from a trigonometry test,but supervillain's structure was better and I was feelin his rhmyes better...

yo weedex my man, u fell off on like the third bar and the closer wasn't a good one...not one of ur best...but I like that SV thing u did...
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Old 12-17-04, 02:27 PM   #4
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what the hell?
ayo that's my vote, how comes it didn't count as a vote?
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Old 12-17-04, 03:42 PM   #5
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Voted For: WeeDex

weedex:

Watch me step the pace up a notch, and SV get dropped
It looks like hes no longer hot, like the rash on his nob-rot
Either his talents gone AWOL or my watch has just stopped.
^^wack all together 4/10
My Sick Verse will destroy him and toy with him with no beat
Needs Prozac in the am, and Swallows Valium, to go to sleep
^^wack ? 4/10
I aint hungry, not trying to be funny, but I can snap like elastic
And this Slimy Vermin practices his slapstick comedy of a spastic
^^good meta and wordplay 7/10
I bet he uses his lyrics to help Sleazy Vile politicians win elections
I never forget a face but for Super Villain I’l make an exception
^^lol good bar 6/10
It’s a win coz your grammars got no glamour, its pointless like a hammer
you try to elevate and create something great but cant n just clam up!
^^decent 5/10
I shouldn’t say it, but his penis is so small, he has to fist the girls
Even funnier when he got laughed out of the GAY Mister World!
^^lmfao your dopest bar 9/10

overall : 35/60 (58%)

Supervillian:

weedex is a man of substance, active ingredients: doja n kleenex
u suggestin' i smoke u or wipe my ass wit ur corpse wen i clean it
^^ good wordplay bad punch 5/10
be my guest, speak them weak lies 'bout these elite guys on r.v's site
please try, we ridin' n comin' titer then ur acid washed bon jovi levi's
^^wtf 4/10
it looks like nows ur time 2 shine, but u blew it...2 bad ur truant
dead guys cant bring new life 2 this site, ur useless, othawise pruv it
^^dope multies decent punch 7/10
hemi-powered 'magnum' rappin'...faggot, u shouldve tried 2 'dodge' us
ya spinal colum da same color as skin of guys the dat drive hondas
^^wtf 4/10
its tragic, this mans rap is comin up short like leprechaun boot buckles
only way u'd beat me 2 a punch is if u head butted this dudes knuckles
^^dopest bar in this battle 10/10
my impression?...if lifes a lesson, im bettin' u got a big fuckin red F
i wont let this kids dyslexia ruin my verse, so here...u-o-y k-c-u-f
^^dopest meta i like the backwards thing i gave that style life on this forum lol 9/10
she found a cure 4 aids, 4got it...was engaged 2 bill gates, but flaked
and 2 this day...weedex the rejects still his mothers biggest mistake
^^ehhh 5/10

overall: 44/70 (63%)

vote: SV

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Old 12-17-04, 03:42 PM   #6
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oops ill get that switched my bad lol ........ ..
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Old 12-17-04, 03:50 PM   #7
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This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN

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Old 12-18-04, 12:05 PM   #8
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^^^up...up......uppin' away!!!

the super duper...c.s.
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I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.




QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE




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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.
 
Old 12-19-04, 05:35 PM   #9
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^^^uppin' this piece once again.....

s.v....c.s.
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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.




QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.
 
Old 12-20-04, 04:20 PM   #10
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Watch me step the pace up a notch, and SV get dropped
It looks like hes no longer hot, like the rash on his nob-rot
Either his talents gone AWOL or my watch has just stopped.
okay
My Sick Verse will destroy him and toy with him with no beat
Needs Prozac in the am, and Swallows Valium, to go to sleep
decent
I aint hungry, not trying to be funny, but I can snap like elastic
And this Slimy Vermin practices his slapstick comedy of a spastic
decent punchline
I bet he uses his lyrics to help Sleazy Vile politicians win elections
I never forget a face but for Super Villain I’l make an exception
okay…
It’s a win coz your grammars got no glamour, its pointless like a hammer
you try to elevate and create something great but cant n just clam up!
??...no
I shouldn’t say it, but his penis is so small, he has to fist the girls
Even funnier when he got laughed out of the GAY Mister World!
okay

Next,,,


weedex is a man of substance, active ingredients: doja n kleenex
u suggestin' i smoke u or wipe my ass wit ur corpse wen i clean it
decent opener
be my guest, speak them weak lies 'bout these elite guys on r.v's site
please try, we ridin' n comin' titer then ur acid washed bon jovi levi's
decent punch
it looks like nows ur time 2 shine, but u blew it...2 bad ur truant
dead guys cant bring new life 2 this site, ur useless, othawise pruv it
decent
hemi-powered 'magnum' rappin'...faggot, u shouldve tried 2 'dodge' us
ya spinal colum da same color as skin of guys the dat drive hondas
okay…
its tragic, this mans rap is comin up short like leprechaun boot buckles
only way u'd beat me 2 a punch is if u head butted this dudes knuckles
okay…pretty decent
my impression?...if lifes a lesson, im bettin' u got a big fuckin red F
i wont let this kids dyslexia ruin my verse, so here...u-o-y k-c-u-f
…no
she found a cure 4 aids, 4got it...was engaged 2 bill gates, but flaked
and 2 this day...weedex the rejects still his mothers biggest mistake
decent closer

Overall S.V. took this one wit ease…
obviously came harder in the punches…
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Old 12-20-04, 06:38 PM   #11
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thanks for the feed skriptz. much appreciated homie.

^^^uppin' again.

also, once again.......nice work weedex. hold it down. one.


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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE




"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.
 
Old 12-21-04, 02:38 AM   #12
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Blah...this was a bad battle...but Supervillain takes it for actually havin punches...WeeDex...your entire verse was self glorification...and it was wack as fuck. You had some decent flow, and a decent structure...but that was it. The punches you had...were wack. Work on that...Supervillain has some decent punches and a decent flow...and thats why he takes this battle. Return the favor if you havent already. Links in sig.
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