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| TheWackestMC |
  
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5 | 62.50% |
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3 | 37.50% |
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12-11-04, 11:38 PM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
dammit strobe sorry please remove that im too drunk now sorry
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12-11-04, 11:58 PM
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Voted For: TheWackestMC
A'ight this is one sided...Wackest MC came wit way harder punches and he actually had some multies...Master Mind came a'ight wit some punches and he had personals,,,best line in Master Mind's was his opener. Both had good flow...Don't hate, just elevate. Return the favor, and I'll be ya savior. Haha I'm wack... Topical: hipnoticz Punchline: logic 4 dubz Battle: 9th Degree Topical: Metaskriptz Thanks. |
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12-12-04, 12:08 AM
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#18
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New to RV
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This was feedback posted for MaStErMind
IP: 2850 0D6E
omg i gotta say mastermind hit harder with punches and was very creative with his lines. if i had more posts, i would of voted for mastermind, but thewackiestMC, keep it up, you know wut cha doin Fame
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12-12-04, 09:00 PM
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Metropolis
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IP: B9AB 64CC
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Get A Mic Posts: 6,222 Joined: Aug 2004 From: New York Status: Online Text Record: 46-16 Audio Record: 1-0 IP: 5671 DBDD dammit strobe sorry please remove that im too drunk now sorry __________________ A.I DAMN haha this guy right heree^^^ |
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12-12-04, 09:08 PM
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#20
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New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: MaStErMind
hmm weak battle... TWMC: your verse was a simile to your name wack... you had good wordplay and a couple decent multies but overall it was weak... some OK punches but nothing that really stood out no personals so it was kinda wack overall : 4.5/10 MM: you had a decent verse... decent wordplay... structure was alittle messed up... even up the lines and dont use the slashes (/////) makes your verse look even wacked and more stretched... better punches than TWMC so it was aiight verse overall : 6/10
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12-12-04, 09:24 PM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: DE1C 607B
Voted For: TheWackestMC
MaStErMind *TheWackestMC* cant *Master* this *Mind*/ im bout to beat you like a slave and this master dont lie// you brought a knife to a gun fight-its gonna be a catastrophe/ punchure ya skin with my lyrical daggers-you cant make a pass at me// assault you like my name was stephen jackson/ this cat was desperate to battle-still want some action?// while you at home watchin 8 mile on tv/ ill be on 106 and park kickin it wit AJ and free// thinkim gonna pass up a battle wi you?-bitch please/ how easy was it to *Bitch-Slap* this MC// yo you got almost 3 days to post ya verse/ but he probably wont-too busy trin to get his nut to burst//...............your verse was played man...you had decent flow, and the punches were decent...but that kickin it with aj and free line...someone has used that before...i am from MICHIGAN 2 man...so i know it aint your line...but other than that, you just need to be a little bit more creative and more raw...your verse...>>>>>7/10<<<<<< TheWackestMC yall dont me to b sparkin the metal, u play ya part in stillettos i'll lay-up wit ya bitch with the art of Carmello u say u a mastermind?....i got a faster rhyme that'll smash ya mind... and leave u last in line them punches pluck this nigga right back in time they way u wear ya Mic , that shit is fashion crime boy i aint playin, im as wack as they come only time u POP-POP is when u crakin ya thumbs u aint hot those lines is too cold to bake n ya bars aint heavy, they fools gold in weight this bitch prolly stop n cry, when i drop his size n reveal the fact that he likes dudes wit cock inside stop ya lies, thats why u get ostricized and them rhymes u use is so old that they fossilized>>>>>CHO MAN...YOUR VERSE...WAS...UMM...GOOD...LOL...YOU HAD GOOD FLOW...IT WAS IN A WAY FUNNY, AND THE USE OF METAS, VOCAB AND MULTIES WAS GOOD...THAT IS WHAT EDGED YOU, WAS THE VOCAB AND MULTIE HITS...THE ONLY THING YOU NEED TO WORK ON IS ELEVATING TO A NEW LEVEL...IN THIS BATTLE YOU WERE 5 LEVELS UP...GET TO TEN, AND YOU WILL B SET...>>>>>>9/10<<<<<<<<
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12-16-04, 11:24 AM
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IP: 04BF 7C46
cmon few more votes peeps.....its a close battle, lets get a winner!
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12-27-04, 10:15 AM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: F979 0B30
Voted For: MaStErMind
I have to go with MASTER on this becuase I could understand him better. his flow was ok, rhyming I think he could do better but its iight. hits where I think where a lil harder, personels where harder,imagry was good, opener-closer neither of u have but work on it. SO i HAVE to go with master peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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12-27-04, 10:31 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: CA1E 5A60
Voted For: TheWackestMC
he got my vote cuz he ripped him in every category but the mastermind did come with some cold shit tho...look at my battles and pick a winner be honest |
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12-31-04, 03:56 AM
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#27
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Flyweight
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IP: ED58 7340
Voted For: TheWackestMC
mastermind *TheWackestMC* cant *Master* this *Mind*/ im bout to beat you like a slave and this master dont lie// nice opener with the wordplay. you brought a knife to a gun fight-its gonna be a catastrophe/ punchure ya skin with my lyrical daggers-you cant make a pass at me// no. the flow was off alot and wasnt complex at all. too basic. while you at home watchin 8 mile on tv/ ill be on 106 and park kickin it wit AJ and free// too simple and just weak. thinkim gonna pass up a battle wi you?-bitch please/ how easy was it to *Bitch-Slap* this MC// wack. bad attempt at a punch on this one. yo you got almost 3 days to post ya verse/ but he probably wont-too busy trin to get his nut to burst// weakk..weak..weak finisher. wackest mc yall dont me to b sparkin the metal, u play ya part in stillettos i'll lay-up wit ya bitch with the art of Carmello it was a little basic but i liked the carmello line for some reason. somewhat decent opener. u say u a mastermind?....i got a faster rhyme that'll smash ya mind... and leave u last in line no complexity or punch but at least the flow was good. nice amount of multis in this bar. them punches pluck this nigga right back in time they way u wear ya Mic , that shit is fashion crime a little weak. however, it was better than what mastermind had in most of his verse. still a bad overall attempt at a punch/metaphore. boy i aint playin, im as wack as they come only time u POP-POP is when u crakin ya thumbs lol kinda funny with the first line. the second was an average punch. lol but probably the best line of the battle. u aint hot those lines is too cold to bake n ya bars aint heavy, they fools gold in weight first line was filler and garbage. the second was halfway decent because you attempted a punch. this bitch prolly stop n cry, when i drop his size n reveal the fact that he likes dudes wit cock inside nope. just weak. stop ya lies, thats why u get ostricized and them rhymes u use is so old that they fossilized average..a little basic though. it flowed good at least. both of you need to work on personals and punches more. but the wackest emcee takes this because he came a slight more complex than mastermind did in his verse. elevate to both of you and stay up |
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