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12-14-04, 11:45 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
Voted For: Limited Edition
Stg? What does that stand for? Sound's like std... ...only in wack names, this fuckin' herb is bestin' me ^^nice wordplay and personal Just give up facin' people wit 5 wins you failed your mission... ...I'll scare you outta the game, you in RapVersephobic condition ^^decent punch couda been harder You in the position of stupidity, herbs don't battle me that's a given... ...'Cause you one of the livin' now, by acceptin this battle ya grave you diggin' ^^good punch nice multis Of time, this was a waste, dawg learn your place quickly... ...you'll have actualy skill after this 'cause the lines you bit from me... ^^nice punch had some humor i thought ok easy win no doubt lol...i woulda voted honestly on 1 of ya other battles but i dont have enough wins yet....bu nice flow...was consistant.......wordplay was good........good punches.........nice personal....ok metas..............good multi usage.......structure was iffy ya had soem stretched lines.....decent vocab life is like a box of chocolates,neva kno wut u gunna get/come around talkin tha shit n you'll b meetin the tech/illness spillen out the mouth so u would think i wus sick/nigga i'll put red dots on ya eyes like u wus takin a pic/this niggas a straight bitch,n hes sorry i picked'em/they should call him x box cuz i own the system/if u think u can c me then u must b insane/have yo ass scare crowed b 4 i blow out ya brains/nigga i got a million gunz like attack of da clones/fill the clip ,load the mack ,then im attackin ya dome/i think youv learned ya lesson bitch so pack up n go home/ NEVER write like this again..i repeat NEVER write like this again it throws off ya flow........its horrible structure.......and its not easy to read.....nobody likes it..........so learn that......other than that ya had a decent flow......punches were weak tho.....no personals.......good multi usage.........basic vocab.......dont talk like you own 620437650824375 guns when first of all i bet they not even real...........bttles are about dissin your opponent not talking bout how u got guns and shit like that.....just work on dissin you opponent more direct......and figure some personals in ther and fix how ya write and you'll succed more in battles..........no hate just sayin how it it......  v/Limited Edition
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12-15-04, 01:34 AM
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
A'ight thanks...uppin' for the final vote. Favors with links will be returned.
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12-17-04, 10:41 PM
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IP: 9C71 A7B8
uppin people vote
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12-18-04, 11:04 AM
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IP: 6BEB 4FD9
Voted For: Limited Edition
(2)punches limited (3)enjoy stg (1)originality limited (1)wordplaylimited (1.5)multies none (4)limited edition (3)stg limited edition wins by one point 4 to 3 Why Did You Lose? this was a close battle but he tooh it by just a little Why Did You Win? nice drop you barley beat him
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