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SpecialMayonaise 2 28.57%
Terror2005 5 71.43%
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Old 12-20-04, 10:49 AM   #16
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From: Florida
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Voted For: SpecialMayonaise

Special M took this one..
punches were hard hittin, structure was aight
vocab wasd decent, and the structure was ok
overall S.M. had a decent drop

Terror..ur punches lacked..structure was stretched
and the flow to it lost me..overall..elevate more tho
then maybe u'll start winnin battles..


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Old 12-20-04, 03:11 PM   #17
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yo uppin dis shit lets get some votes come on RV dont sleep......~1~ favor will be returned
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Old 12-20-04, 03:24 PM   #18
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Voted For: SpecialMayonaise

LOL...both of you are wack as fuck.....terror...just quit please...to save us all the wackness....SP....i see alittle elevating coming your way if you work at it....well my vote goes to SP...for better atempting punches.,,..and better personals....v/SP

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Old 12-20-04, 06:47 PM   #19
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uppin dis bitch lets get some votes in people honest votes only.......~1~
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Old 12-21-04, 02:59 PM   #20
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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Old 12-21-04, 05:24 PM   #21
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Voted For: Terror2005

If you wanna see some terror, take a quick peep at his verse
Cuz i back up my beef like a meat truck stuck in reverse
^^^special, dope wordplay but not a punch.

terror, real basic stuff but more actual punches not as many self gloryfing lines like sayin what you can do or like "im layin you out"

Yo son im tellin da truth in dis battle your dealin wit a "deadly target"//
U wouldnt be on fire even if u was covered wit gas had a match and sparked it//

I really dont think ur goin to win dis one cuz winnin is my instinct//
ur style is bout as fake as the "backstreet boys" and "N'Sync"//
^^^more of the right idea, think of sumin to call him or sumin he's lackin, and put it into wordplay form. not bad.
vote-this cat for doin more of what your sopposed to in battles
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Old 12-21-04, 07:55 PM   #22
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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Old 12-22-04, 12:14 PM   #23
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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Old 12-22-04, 12:18 PM   #24
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checkin pollz............
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The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......
 
Old 12-22-04, 10:46 PM   #25
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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Old 12-23-04, 08:07 AM   #26
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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Old 12-23-04, 08:20 AM   #27
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Voted For: Terror2005

Vote: terror 2005

dis shit shud b a K.O

openr: terror
closer: terror
vocab: terror
structure: special mayo
lyrics: terror
originality: terror
punches: terror
personals: neitha - maybe mayo
wordplay: terror

terror - 8.5/10
mayo - 6/10

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Old 12-23-04, 02:28 PM   #28
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Voted For: Terror2005


Terror Got This
Wow Terror This Was Some Decent Shit Hommie, You Vocabulary Was Here, Punches Was Hitting, Not To Mention Personals, You RHyme Scheme Was Decent, WordPlay In Here Was Tight, Some Mulit's Not Much Meta's But Aye This Was A Good Verse Hommie......9/10

Special
Damn Homes You Need Some Elivation, Rhyme Scheme Wasn't Here, Punches Wasn't Even Touching Terror, Personals Wasn't Even Good, Word Play There Was None, Need To Throw In SOme Multi's Here And Get Some Meta's.....6/10

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Old 12-24-04, 04:18 PM   #29
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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Old 12-26-04, 04:39 PM   #30
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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