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Old 12-15-04, 01:29 AM   #1
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sdizzle really dont come in here saying shit.....im still laughing from seeing your picture 3 months ago......on the real..get some lypo and hit the tanning bed...........or you could stay the same....im sure you could make some mad cash over christmas break posing as santa you fat fucker......and your audios suck fuckin balls.....you wack piece of shit.......you remind me of a fuckin cheese ball you fuckin nerd....eat shit and die ho
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Old 12-15-04, 01:31 AM   #2
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sdizzle really dont come in here saying shit.....im still laughing from seeing your picture 3 months ago......on the real..get some lypo and hit the tanning bed...........or you could stay the same....im sure you could make some mad cash over christmas break posing as santa you fat fucker......and your audios suck fuckin balls.....you wack piece of shit.......you remind me of a fuckin cheese ball you fuckin nerd....eat shit and die ho

if your talking to me look at my record and i beat the best on this site and my audios will sun you as well as my text
<<<<<he will merk you
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Old 12-15-04, 01:29 AM   #3
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im not the ones going and checking th battle to see who won... i asked for nothing
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Old 12-15-04, 01:31 AM   #4
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lol its funny how the herbs when insulted always try to make me feel bad by saying sumthing from my picture

but am i supposed to be insulted by some kids online saying im unattractive

A. your male, making it gay that u judging my looks
B. u have no game, thats why u try to be cool online
C. u lost
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Old 12-15-04, 01:33 AM   #5
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Mike Hawk's Verse

The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes
Best line of the battle....it had originality, humor, and it dissed him all at the same time.....did I mention the wordplay?
Ike is a softy, I'll come on RV to slay this whore
It's not a gay marriage...when i say he jus cant engage in war
Not a good punch.....sorry Mike, it just sucked
You scared of Mike Hawk, why wont you tell us
If i called u out, you would duck me so much, it'll make Donald jealous
Not a bad concept, but worded poorly
Nasty bitch...dont nobody wanna visit ya house
Ever since you were born..thats when they been callin it the Dirty South
Once again, not a bad concept, but worded really poorly
Ike, I got big guns....and you know what I mean
When I say, youll make it to the next round...........
....if you not dead after the first 16.
Nice closer....not really a gun talk line since it actually had wordplay in it. Probably the second best line of the battle...

Ike's Verse
Even if HAWKS sight are in black 'n' white, he's "gonna see im nice"
might try to imitate jordan, but nobody "wanna be like mike"
I've only seen like two or three of Mike's battles since he's been here.....both of them contained this punch...
may think you nice, but only to "yaself it might seem"
you say you tight, despite your record bein "twelve 'n' nineteen"
How is this a good punch? His record sucks......now can you make a decent punch out of it? No, you can't. All you can say is your record sucks.....this one ranks up there with a your momma joke
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"
Horrible....if you have to use the word "like" in your punch, chances are, it sucks.....just thought I'd let you know that
IKE is spittin gifted lines, that rip this "misfits mind"
and leave this chumps frame crooked like a "lipstick line"
Once again, the simple fact that this is a simile took all affectiveness away from this punch...
I choose to elude this dude, this verse is a "lesson you might use"
you's a fool if you thought i'd lose to a "freshman in high school"
So he's a freshman.....nothing witty to say about it?

Basically, Ike came really played and didn't really know how to form a punch. Mike Hawk had Two semi decent punches that completely engulfed anything Ike tried to have go in his favor. This was a pretty crappy battle, but honestly, Mike won by a landslide.....and this is just me being honest
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Old 12-15-04, 01:34 AM   #6
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a. you win the rv award for the fattest fuck on the site
b. i have no game? haha thats all i can say on that
c. im sure you havent seen your penis in about 6 years because you so fuckin huge your stomach hangs over it, so im sure there has never been a female within a 5 foot radius of your dick....but yet i have no game? haha
d.apparently your fat and you cant read worth a shit because it is obvious i won the battle....
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Old 12-15-04, 01:38 AM   #7
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a. you win the rv award for the fattest fuck on the site
b. i have no game? haha thats all i can say on that
c. im sure you havent seen your penis in about 6 years because you so fuckin huge your stomach hangs over it, so im sure there has never been a female within a 5 foot radius of your dick....but yet i have no game? haha
d.apparently your fat and you cant read worth a shit because it is obvious i won the battle....

basically 2 words describe you................played & wack
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Old 12-15-04, 01:37 AM   #8
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lol so i lost because i used the word "like"???????? ok
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Old 12-15-04, 01:39 AM   #9
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ike stfu, you can't fucking cry because of one battle seriously now your being a fucking retard about this
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Old 12-15-04, 01:41 AM   #10
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It's a similie and they don't go well with punches

I could say your shit sucks like....

1. Feces with vacuum cleaners
2. Turds with DSLs
3. Magnetic Crap

Do you see what I'm getting at. It loses it's effectiveness if I can say just about anything with your generic similie.....
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Old 12-15-04, 11:00 AM   #11
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It's a similie and they don't go well with punches

I could say your shit sucks like....

1. Feces with vacuum cleaners
2. Turds with DSLs
3. Magnetic Crap

Do you see what I'm getting at. It loses it's effectiveness if I can say just about anything with your generic similie.....


I like usin similies.....
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Old 12-15-04, 01:49 AM   #12
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aright man......im done with the beef n everything.....im just tryin to back myself up because i thought i won the battle........im still gonna try my hardest to get back in this shit...cuz im only down 4-2......but i know it prolly aint gonna happen....so it whatever.....lets just drop the beef net beef is garbage......we good?
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Old 12-15-04, 01:53 AM   #13
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Yeah.....I wasn't trying to beef with you. In all actuality, I was trying to help you elevate. Take some of my advice, it wasn't out of anger
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Old 12-15-04, 01:56 AM   #14
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aright man i hear ya....ill try not to use the "like" word so much anymore.....lol but troop did use it in his verse! and he is a vet.....lol but on the real....thanks for tryin to help.....no beef..
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Old 12-15-04, 02:04 AM   #15
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Troop is not a vet....please take that back....lol.

Anyway, it's not the word "like" that kills the punch, it's the fact that it's a similie. The word could sometimes be "as"

Gay as a unicorn riding, rainbow sporting, in the ass taking, tight shirt wearing, feminine voice sounding.....well, I think you get my point....lol.

Just try not to use similies
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