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Old 12-26-04, 06:28 PM   #1
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Old 12-27-04, 11:26 AM   #2
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Old 12-27-04, 12:03 PM   #3
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Old 12-30-04, 02:31 PM   #4
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upping for feedback. i know it wasnt my best but it was pretty good.
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Old 12-31-04, 01:21 PM   #5
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Old 12-31-04, 05:06 PM   #6
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this was good man or woman --- yall really sihtty at givin feed in the poetry lunge
what kind of feed is 4/10 ..i feel liek slappin that dude

anyways good shit keep elevatin is all i can say
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Old 12-31-04, 05:08 PM   #7
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Old 12-31-04, 05:50 PM   #8
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this was o.k....pretty simple though.....could have came deeper with the concept a bit more......5/10
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Old 12-31-04, 06:03 PM   #9
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Old 01-01-05, 12:21 AM   #10
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Work on ya rhyming, some of your lines didn't rhyme. Work on vocab, flow, structure, overall elevate, it wuz a decent drop. px
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Old 01-01-05, 10:42 AM   #11
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