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01-10-05, 02:19 PM
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uppin.....
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01-10-05, 02:29 PM
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this was a real nice piece, the emotion was felt....and you came good with it....concept may have been done before but you seemed to switch it and so it seemed original...anyway keep it up 8/10....
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01-10-05, 11:57 PM
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thanx for the feed back !!!
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01-31-05, 03:56 PM
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This poem is deep, nice vocabulary and content, you have a lot to say, and its good to let it out, very well written, please, dont up your work more then 4 times....its hard enough i have to erase em all, this just gives others chances to get their work viewed, you've got talent, so write more..1
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02-09-05, 12:49 PM
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thanx 4 the feed yo!!
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12-20-04, 01:12 PM
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Really nice drop! It doesn't take a genius to see that this came straight from the heart and i loved the way you approached the topic. This has probly been done before but you made it yours. The emotion was sooooo good, i was really feeling everything you stated...It's a sort of cry for help but without losing your dignity, you found a perfect balance...Beautiful!
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