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Old 12-24-04, 04:46 AM   #16
MaRVJay
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damm ya want honest feed back rite??? i have no problem with both of u but i mean goliath ya first didn't even ryhme fam n it look like u were forcin alot of shit da ryhme but it wasn't workin i didn't no punchlines or personals 4real...exponent u save dis callab even tho ya verse was real basic 2 but u came betta than ya man but i dont get how u rap like dis n u said i was wack lmaoooo just givin feedback ya'll
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Old 01-01-05, 01:27 AM   #17
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Nigga don't ever make a diss track in you life. And So niggas won't think i'm just a talkive newbie..LET'S GO!!!
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Old 01-01-05, 01:43 AM   #18
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Eye was wack .. and Exponent was trash .. both go and elevate.
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Old 01-01-05, 01:50 AM   #19
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the second verse was better than the first even though the second one lyrically wacker i say that because the second verse actually made sense even thought it sucked ass u two need to seriously elevate
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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