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| WICKEDCLOWN |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
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1 | 16.67% |
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12-23-04, 11:10 PM
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IP: 3D67 C959
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
ok ok It was a very good and close battle it actually came down really to like whats between the lines if you no what i mean. Wicked: definally a nice verse with a good flow and nice style. The rhyme scheme was definally on the whole time. however i heard a few played out lines and the rhyme were kind of simple. but i did see so mults in there that worked well. You did say faggot alot so i guess some parts got streched. Now there were some good punches and some bad ones: i mean i ain't feeling the rattle one. The personal were there: even though you kept calling him a faggot. I like your word play. overall i think you could have done better but still raw. 7.5/10 Parallel: you also had a nice flow and a very nice style. You also had a good rhyme scheme the whole time and i think that your rhymes were... well more complex. I saw less mults from you but it still sound pretty good when i did it. but i found alot of your punches were like just grapsing for straws they were kinda wack and one bad punch can fuck up a whole verse so.... as for personals you had some that werre good a creative but overall lacing something. also i don't understand why you put some things in bold. 6/10
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12-24-04, 12:56 AM
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IP: D5FE 7245
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
eh but came really weak here in my opinion ive seen better but i think wicked got this in all aspects, his flow was better at had a couple punches that were better...parallels punches just didnt hit as hard or at all though...they were too simple but parallel had a higher vocab... good luck to both no hate but i think wicked got this for better flow and punches peace
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12-24-04, 12:58 AM
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IP: D5FE 7245
^correction in the beginning its "both" came weak here not but
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12-24-04, 10:35 AM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
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12-24-04, 12:17 PM
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
lmao i love how Parallel aint uppin this...... dont talk shit to me fool cause u got owned
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12-24-04, 01:43 PM
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
lol..im uppin this....im playing mba live alot latly...and plus theres no point in upppin a battle when your versign a dick rider...so leave me alone little bitch..i straight owned you....you didnt even use punches or wordplay so shut your mouth
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12-24-04, 02:24 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
^wordplay isnt needed and his punches were harder then yours...half of your verse is threats...not punches, read it over
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12-24-04, 04:31 PM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
uppin.,...........................................
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12-24-04, 06:35 PM
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This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN
IP: 258C A279
Wicked Took This One
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12-24-04, 09:38 PM
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
uppin this.............................................. ........
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12-24-04, 09:57 PM
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IP: 497B D710
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
iight i'ma break this down.... wickedclown - hard ass punchez an mad personalz i wuz feelin this shit didn't have many multiz but still came hard u had okay metaphores vocab wuz pretty decent overall u had a pretty dope verse felt ur flow wuz tight ur barz were almost xactly tha same an ur structure iz good as hell felt this verse more so then i felt parallelz verse para - ur verse wuz pretty good 2 but u had weak punchez an personalz u didn't come wit ur nomal dope ass metaphores so u ain't get it this time but ur verse had nice flow an structure vocab wuz decent also but u gotta step ya game up homie wicked elevated like krazii an u seem 2 be stayin at tha same level but nice verse tho yeahh my vote = wicked clown
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