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Old 12-24-04, 12:27 PM   #16
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aight cool im on it and ill drop @ 10.30
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Old 12-24-04, 12:28 PM   #17
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Yo acuity go look in my thread in the graphic section the Second one
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Old 12-24-04, 12:50 PM   #18
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meh...i made something kinda emotional...but with a good end

I'm lucky that my parent had enough respect to make me live
In my eyes,its almost the best present that can be give
Some wishing to have a 1000 dollars present,nothing to fear
While other is to have a meal and deserve it once in a year
This maybe look like forced and all that shit
But tell you this,this could be you but with different parents
Beatin up and locked in your room,25 of december
But you still want to give a gift card to you family member
A card who speak about a family to remember
They like it and gave him love to make him feel better
He probly had the best christmas of all time
Make christmas a beautiful day,do it,its not a crime
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Old 12-24-04, 12:51 PM   #19
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sorry for the structure...i put the caractere at 3
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Old 12-24-04, 12:54 PM   #20
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meh...i made something kinda emotional...but with a good end

I'm lucky that my parent had enough respect to make me live
In my eyes,its almost the best present that can be give
Some wishing to have a 1000 dollars present,nothing to fear
While other is to have a meal and deserve it once in a year
This maybe look like forced and all that shit
But tell you this,this could be you but with different parents
Beatin up and locked in your room,25 of december
But you still want to give a gift card to you family member
A card who speak about a family to remember
They like it and gave him love to make him feel better
He probly had the best christmas of all time
Make christmas a beautiful day,do it,its not a crime


its aight but mines is def better i give u a 5/10 nice try thou i like effort no diss or hate
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Old 12-24-04, 04:05 PM   #21
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... aiight

From Santa's Perspective

Christmas is a time for joy, a time for giving too
Happiness, love and gifts is what i will give to you
I read the naughty or nice list, then i checked it twice
And i found out that no one on rapverse is very nice
They all want to recieve, but the joy is in giving
And that my children is the reason behind living
For Tommy in Chicago, i have a one of a kind toy
A monkey that sing with symbols and gives everyone joy
For Karrie in Minnesota i have the loveliest thing
A beautiful teddy bear and the purest gold ring
For James in England, i have a gift that he'll love
A remote control airplane that lifts like a dove
I'm a one of a kind man who gives, but doesnt receive
But my happiness is in giving if that you could believe
For all the good boys and girls through-out the world
I'll give thomas a new bike and jenny some pearls
A new car to Chris and tons of toys for his son
I have already gave alot but my job is not done
If you are nice, then on christmas you'll be pleased
But if you are naughty coal is what you will receive

Everything i have said is completely undertood right ?
Well then i wish you a Merry Christmas and good night
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Old 12-24-04, 04:30 PM   #22
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once apon a time the fairy godmother snapped..
sniffin coke in hopes her mind state would break from bein trapped..
with one twist of her wand the bond in fairyland would fill...
with turmoil and grief the first vics were jack and jill...
jack ran to the house of sticks and then the house of bricks..
but the pigs was baggin drugs too, "YOU AIN'T GETTIN IN BITCH!"
robin hood was bout to shoot em, but jack ducked and rolled...
kicked in the door of some house, ran in the room to reload...
but somebody was fuckin, on the bed in this room...
jack pulled the covers and saw the Dish butt-fuckin the Spoon...
that gay shit got jack sick, so he ran back out...
let off shots, he caught 1 in his chest 2 in his mouth..
now jacks dead, the boy who cried wolf made everything right...
merry christmas to all..and to all a GOODNIGHT!!!!



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Old 12-24-04, 04:33 PM   #23
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damn...peeps gonna make this hard for me to judge... be sure to be on here around 11pm eastern tonight to see who won! keep em commin
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Old 12-24-04, 08:38 PM   #24
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Originally Posted by Led Poetic
do it up... you will proplly take it beucaes im not gunna drop i have enough money and im working on a diss for empire... but yeah

prewrite for the touney
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Old 12-24-04, 08:39 PM   #25
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damn i completely 4got about dis...............oh well cnt b bothered now - but Flow has taken it i reckin
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Old 12-24-04, 08:52 PM   #26
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I've been naughty all year robbing and stealing
Woman on thiers knees boobing until they swallowed my children
Ive sold drugs hung with thugs and started bullshit
Drunk packing my pump all day acting foolish
I burned the christmas tree in the fireplace and ate all his cookies
So i know Santas bringing me coal watch when i catch that pussy
Venision burgers outta rudolph,doner and blitzin
Then im hacking up and cooking dancer,prancer ,and nixon
Im taking his sled and going for rides in his whip
Drivebys on a sled with the elfs reloading my clips
Back to the north with misses claus on my pole
While im busting all in her face and videotaping the ho
The fat man tied up watching as im piping his wife
Now you can really see 'If i been naughty or nice'
So listen Mr.Claus before you come down my chimmeny bitch
You best have everything i asked for on my list
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Old 12-24-04, 09:15 PM   #27
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uppin this... its pretty much between 2 people as of now but still uppin
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Old 12-24-04, 09:18 PM   #28
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i sed its goin 2 flow but now its a toss up batween flow and cali
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Old 12-24-04, 09:35 PM   #29
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hit this up folks... 1 mill up for grabs
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Old 12-24-04, 09:42 PM   #30
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a sad kid christmas in the hood written by hang-man * read the whole thing *

marry christmas, i got the best wish list
2 pound of dro from stanta, but how can u give this
the hood kidz dont need this yet they ask for it
got so much green i can start up my own danm forrest
cicer are to little to cut up some bud
my hand on a nugget looks like a leave with a bug
but my brother got cancer and all he do is smoke
moms always steelin some hes perscrib drugs N mix it w/ coke
sister out crying at night, cuz her piss hurt from whoerin the corner
got her pubic hairs look like its ant infested the way the crabs are on-her
got her itchin till her skin peel off and all dad do is watch her bath-in-shower
always asking to put some cream, no bottle, so why would was he ask-in-coward
i keep getting cought by the law, and all they do is beat me
saying HEY-FREEZ u SPIC, like thats a way to greet me
but sadly thats the way the streets-be
and i kept on asking santa, on christmas make it stop
but this wasnt something hes helpers can make at the shop
is he god or one of hes angles who grant wishes like a genie
but if i could get one wish granted it would be, NOT TO BE ME
but the day came and noting happen, just more fights with a empty tree
susiced thought with a gun in my mouth waiting to empty three
but 2 month pass N no-one wounder where was i till watchin NBC
cuz for 10 min i was a star, playing a dead-roll floting from the sea
so stanta u aint gotta grant me my wish and i alwasy wounder why u aint
but lifes ova, cuz the knife throught-cut.. and my family was emtion-less like a blank-picture with no-paint...(in)....
and now all i can do is ask god to put me under hes arms N not next to SAINT....(en)

DANM WHAT A CHRISTMAS TO REMEMBER



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