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damn chick stop writin shit what u think u gonna promote your win is you the don king of this rap shit huh
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WHAT_EVER MAAAAAN!!
DONT GET MAD CUZ A FEM CAN FLOW BETTER DEN YOU.. AND FOR DA LAST TIME, I DO NOT WRITE SHYT..I KEY MY SHYT NO_LESS DEN 20 MINS.. SO GET OF MY PUSS I"VE BEEN DOING DIS BEFORE U KNEW ABOUT DA INTERNET.. RECORDS; b-boyz- 16-2 planetrap 13-1 jack4beats 26-4 57-7 BELIEVE IT OR NOT...... ---------------------------- uppin |
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dis site sleepz too much..wake yo azz up
1-1 uppin |
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this was a nice battle you both came wit some funny ass punches and 'creative' ass lyrics........
Dane took this though i think she had a tighterflow balanced wit harder punches...peace return the favor on my battles yall |
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thx creative.. i'mma drop a vote on ur batle but even thou u voted for me dosnt mean i'mma vote on u..but we'll se, checkin ur battle now
2-1 uppin |
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C.F.C still waitin for his 2nd win
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My vote...
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The Femcee...for these reasons
Breakdown of Verses C.F.C. Quote:
^^^^^Started weak in my view and rhymed with the same shit. Quote:
^^^^^^^^That was weak as hell, maaaan. Quote:
^^^^^^^It was aight....Your text raps bore me like Cam'Ron. Quote:
^^^^^^The first line bout the hand on ya dick is played and the easy e line was aight. Quote:
^^^^^It was pretty weak. Seemed lik the first line Fabolous ever spit or some shit. Quote:
^^^^^OK line but still lookin' for the goodness. Quote:
^^^^^^Weak as hell Quote:
^^^^^^The first line was good but the 2nd line fu'cked up the rhyme scheme and was weak. Quote:
^^^^^^Jerry Springer line was OK I guess but the Alicia Keys line is extremely played. I'll give that verse about a 1.5/10. Ms. Danna Dane Quote:
^^^^^^Pretty good even though I'm not too much into the gangsta rap shit. Quote:
^^^^^^^^This bar got kinda sloppy and you already used an "L" line in the bar b4 it. Quote:
^^^^^OK bar Quote:
^^^^^^Nice shit. Quote:
^^^^^^pretty decent bar. Quote:
^^^^^^Really not into the gangsta rap but still better than all of his bars. Quote:
^^^^^^The first line was borin' but the password line was nice. Quote:
^^^^^^^^OK bar. Quote:
^^^^^Ha! Nice finishin' line. Give this verse a 5.5/10 Flow: Dane Creativity: Dane Punches: Dane Wordplay: None (that I saw) Overall ![]() Vote=Ms. Danna Dane Last edited by Nefarious Lev : 07-13-02 at 11:37 PM. |
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whoa whoa i see some hatin for real 1.5 get out of here with that bullshit dog
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It wasn't hatin'. It was the plain truth. Show me a tight bar you had and explain it. It seems like you forced a whole verse. Find someone who will honestly disagree then. That was a clean and fair vote and your verse was weak as hell. Take it how you wanna but it's the truth.
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my whole rhyme was good it was'nt the best shit i ever wrote i can take some advice but lets be real 1.5 get the fuck out of here wit that
nigga what u canibus now u ain't sick like that and i'll be damned if a mothafucka gonna try to act like he beyond me and say my rhymes is weak lets be real about that shit i ain't got no problem countin that vote i could give a fuck about it u jus hatin on me personally right there so like i tell all mistaken cats get ur mind right |
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damn danna i was hopin we both gave him a ko
but a win is good any wayz lmao hey c.f.c we both beat you you wack motha fuck i know she havent won yet but she is cuz its 3-1 hahahah |
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I see you've become upset like an emotional bitch about my vote and there probably isn't a person who'd disagree. We can battle then. No I'm not Canibus but your shit was extremely weak and it's a fact. |
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lets do it faggot set it up in bitch slapped
and skillz get outta here u wack faggot u neva should of beat me your verse was'nt shit to mine and we gonna battle again you'll get burned like this homothug i'm bout to battle now |
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LMAO
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I WOULD OF KO"D DIS CAT IF LIL D AND COME IN D/R TALKIN BOUT HIS PUNCHES WUZ BETTER DEN MINES///
MUHUHAHAHA!!! 3-1 UPPIN ____________________ I TOLD U CFC U CANNOT NOT FUCK WITH ME OR SKILLZ.. NOW TAKE 2 L"S TO UR GRILL/ IF I WOULD OF POST DAT I WOULD OF STILL WON!!! NOW GO GET A NEW ALAIS U BYTCH |
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alright fuck dis lil arguement.......
Yo kid u need 2 start from the foundation..... @ least attempt 2 make ALL yo linez rhyme, thatz where u fucked up, couple played out linez, lotta room 4 improvement, don't trip though i aint gonna diss yo good linez, kauze simply i aint found any, Elevate..... alright woman, yo flow was decent, nothin high standard or glamourous, but it was by far the better flow, u started with that "Cooked lobster tail" line that was pretty basic but that alone was a good start against yo opponent, try not using obvious thingz in yo linez, it remindz me of "tryin 2 step 2 me wit yo linez but yo shoe lacez un-tied" so i usually str8 talk shit but since yo opponent'z verse made me feel sick i read yo entire flow, after a better start.... u waz goin a lil off subject but workin on yo opponent so that aint a minus, and i actually lined the ending "and if dis wack nicca win, i wanna re-match it..like OJ gettin married again, i want another stab at-it" good job woman, thatz how u got my vote. Something 2 think bout..... next time u trippin on h8 votez which u seem like the only 1 who think it's a h8 vote, make sure u don't suck, by the way.... Elevate. Vote = Ms Danna Dane Aka Da broad who Whooped yo azz |
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