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Old 07-13-02, 05:47 PM   #1
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damn chick stop writin shit what u think u gonna promote your win is you the don king of this rap shit huh
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Old 07-13-02, 05:56 PM   #2
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From: 2 hits from a grammy..and 2 hits from seeing granny..
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WHAT_EVER MAAAAAN!!

DONT GET MAD CUZ A FEM CAN FLOW BETTER DEN YOU.. AND FOR DA LAST TIME, I DO NOT WRITE SHYT..I KEY MY SHYT NO_LESS DEN 20 MINS.. SO GET OF MY PUSS I"VE BEEN DOING DIS BEFORE U KNEW ABOUT DA INTERNET..

RECORDS;

b-boyz- 16-2
planetrap 13-1
jack4beats 26-4

57-7


BELIEVE IT OR NOT......
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Old 07-13-02, 09:54 PM   #3
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dis site sleepz too much..wake yo azz up


1-1

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Old 07-13-02, 10:07 PM   #4
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this was a nice battle you both came wit some funny ass punches and 'creative' ass lyrics........
Dane took this though i think she had a tighterflow balanced wit harder punches...peace return the favor on my battles yall
 
Old 07-13-02, 10:11 PM   #5
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thx creative.. i'mma drop a vote on ur batle but even thou u voted for me dosnt mean i'mma vote on u..but we'll se, checkin ur battle now


2-1 uppin
 
Old 07-13-02, 11:04 PM   #6
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C.F.C still waitin for his 2nd win
 
Old 07-13-02, 11:33 PM   #7
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My vote...

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The Femcee...for these reasons

Breakdown of Verses

C.F.C.

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aight miss I really don't wanna verbally bust on you'
i jus wanna get u in the bed wit no clothes on and than bust on u'

^^^^^Started weak in my view and rhymed with the same shit.

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chick u ain't nasty enough to get close to defeatin me'
should'nt u be playin wit dolls listenin to peaches and cream'

^^^^^^^^That was weak as hell, maaaan.

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nah let me stop ur clicks a bunch a b-boys this is a MC sight'
ur fuckin wit an A plus nigga your only B boy tight'

^^^^^^^It was aight....Your text raps bore me like Cam'Ron.

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yo the only way your beatin me is wit ur hands on my dick'
I bet u fucked easy-e before he died jus to say that ur sick'

^^^^^^The first line bout the hand on ya dick is played and the easy e line was aight.

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u did'nt really wanna get into a verbal rumble'
your like mugsy bougues in this rap game shootin against Mutumbo'

^^^^^It was pretty weak. Seemed lik the first line Fabolous ever spit or some shit.

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so get ur mind right like jay and bleek'
your rhymes are shit do ur teeth decay when u speak'

^^^^^OK line but still lookin' for the goodness.

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please do me a favor and don't neva battle again'
your raps are illegal so basically ur battlin a sin'

^^^^^^Weak as hell

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your skillz is like a decapatated corpse tryin to be the head chairman'
by the time this rhyme is over ur gonna be my new #1 fan'

^^^^^^The first line was good but the 2nd line fu'cked up the rhyme scheme and was weak.

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i'm bout to leave u wit my final thought like this was jerry springer'
ur rap skillz are fallin like alicia keys maybe u should of been a singer'

^^^^^^Jerry Springer line was OK I guess but the Alicia Keys line is extremely played.

I'll give that verse about a 1.5/10.





Ms. Danna Dane

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fuckin with dane? u catchin a quick "L'..my verse lets off steam like da humudity down in hell..i catch you on da block and i'mma flood ur fenders with gun-shells..leaving ur body red-HOT! like a cooked lobster tail/

^^^^^^Pretty good even though I'm not too much into the gangsta rap shit.

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i wuz gonna spit 1st so i can smoke a L and wait on ur chump-shyt..its ashame u gettin ur azz beat quicker den a horny munk dick..so just face da facts and get-over it/

^^^^^^^^This bar got kinda sloppy and you already used an "L" line in the bar b4 it.

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you mad cuz u cant get down with a crew or u keep gettin trade..you beatin me? ur head must be pulled tight, nicca take out dem braids/

^^^^^OK bar

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steppin to me, u betta have sum ill-ness installed.. u standin next to me while ur celly ringin is da only way dis will be a close call/

^^^^^^Nice shit.

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the feelin of beatin me,so far only sK!llz will know.. u couldnt gas me even if ur verse wuz presented by amaco/

^^^^^^pretty decent bar.

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i'll come round ur set and will destroy ur enviroment.. go ahead and grab ur nine,i do mike-style and brang da 45 back outta retirement/

^^^^^^Really not into the gangsta rap but still better than all of his bars.

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i;m throwin punches, why u scratchin trynna get dane frame scar'd..my punches will leave'ya lik typing in a pass-word, all u see is stars/

^^^^^^The first line was borin' but the password line was nice.

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and i'm droppin nothin but dat hot shyt,dunn.. leavin mo shock-wave impacts den a nuclear bomb colliding with da air-force-one/

^^^^^^^^OK bar.

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and if dis wack nicca win, i wanna re-match it..like OJ gettin married again, i want another stab at-it/LOL

^^^^^Ha! Nice finishin' line.

Give this verse a 5.5/10

Flow: Dane
Creativity: Dane
Punches: Dane
Wordplay: None (that I saw)

Overallane

Vote=Ms. Danna Dane

Last edited by Nefarious Lev : 07-13-02 at 11:37 PM.
 
Old 07-13-02, 11:55 PM   #8
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whoa whoa i see some hatin for real 1.5 get out of here with that bullshit dog
 
Old 07-13-02, 11:57 PM   #9
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It wasn't hatin'. It was the plain truth. Show me a tight bar you had and explain it. It seems like you forced a whole verse. Find someone who will honestly disagree then. That was a clean and fair vote and your verse was weak as hell. Take it how you wanna but it's the truth.
 
Old 07-14-02, 12:08 AM   #10
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my whole rhyme was good it was'nt the best shit i ever wrote i can take some advice but lets be real 1.5 get the fuck out of here wit that
nigga what u canibus now u ain't sick like that and i'll be damned if a mothafucka gonna try to act like he beyond me and say my rhymes is weak
lets be real about that shit i ain't got no problem countin that vote i could give a fuck about it u jus hatin on me personally right there so like i tell all mistaken cats get ur mind right
 
Old 07-14-02, 12:08 AM   #11
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damn danna i was hopin we both gave him a ko

but a win is good any wayz lmao

hey c.f.c

we both beat you

you wack motha fuck

i know she havent won yet but she is

cuz its 3-1 hahahah
 
Old 07-14-02, 12:12 AM   #12
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Originally posted by C.F.C
my whole rhyme was good it was'nt the best shit i ever wrote i can take some advice but lets be real 1.5 get the fuck out of here wit that
nigga what u canibus now u ain't sick like that and i'll be damned if a mothafucka gonna try to act like he beyond me and say my rhymes is weak
lets be real about that shit i ain't got no problem countin that vote i could give a fuck about it u jus hatin on me personally right there so like i tell all mistaken cats get ur mind right


I see you've become upset like an emotional bitch about my vote and there probably isn't a person who'd disagree. We can battle then. No I'm not Canibus but your shit was extremely weak and it's a fact.
 
Old 07-14-02, 12:16 AM   #13
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lets do it faggot set it up in bitch slapped

and skillz get outta here u wack faggot u neva should of beat me your verse was'nt shit to mine and we gonna battle again you'll get burned like this homothug i'm bout to battle now
 
Old 07-14-02, 12:23 AM   #14
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From: 2 hits from a grammy..and 2 hits from seeing granny..
LMAO

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I WOULD OF KO"D DIS CAT IF LIL D AND COME IN D/R TALKIN BOUT HIS PUNCHES WUZ BETTER DEN MINES///

MUHUHAHAHA!!!


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I TOLD U CFC U CANNOT NOT FUCK WITH ME OR SKILLZ..
NOW TAKE 2 L"S TO UR GRILL/

IF I WOULD OF POST DAT I WOULD OF STILL WON!!!

NOW GO GET A NEW ALAIS U BYTCH
 
Old 07-14-02, 12:24 AM   #15
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alright fuck dis lil arguement.......

Yo kid u need 2 start from the foundation..... @ least attempt 2 make ALL yo linez rhyme, thatz where u fucked up, couple played out linez, lotta room 4 improvement, don't trip though i aint gonna diss yo good linez, kauze simply i aint found any, Elevate.....

alright woman, yo flow was decent, nothin high standard or glamourous, but it was by far the better flow, u started with that "Cooked lobster tail" line that was pretty basic but that alone was a good start against yo opponent, try not using obvious thingz in yo linez, it remindz me of "tryin 2 step 2 me wit yo linez but yo shoe lacez un-tied" so i usually str8 talk shit but since yo opponent'z verse made me feel sick i read yo entire flow, after a better start.... u waz goin a lil off subject but workin on yo opponent so that aint a minus, and i actually lined the ending "and if dis wack nicca win, i wanna re-match it..like OJ gettin married again, i want another stab at-it" good job woman, thatz how u got my vote.

Something 2 think bout..... next time u trippin on h8 votez which u seem like the only 1 who think it's a h8 vote, make sure u don't suck, by the way.... Elevate.

Vote = Ms Danna Dane Aka Da broad who Whooped yo azz
 
 


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