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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

lawless gets my vote cuz even tho he went off topic he came hard enuff ta make up for it but i keep seein this kkkhater bitch wantin ta battle about a carjacking prolly' cuz he already got his shit written out..but too bad you still lost...look out on my open battles....chuck low

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

vote: lawless ...... everything was way better then kkk's crappy shit ....... punches were awesome and metas were real nice and ya vocab was good as well and kkk just didnt have a good verse ....... so i vote for lawless

upppppppppppppppin dis battle come on and vote peace.

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Voted For: kkkhater

im thinkin this was SUPPOSED to be a topical so yeh
kkk-
vocab-basic
imagry-decent
storyline-on point
creativity-decent
structure-lacking
flow-okay

you actually did the topic so yeah thats the only reason you get my vote

lawless-yeh you musta not known this was a topical battle kid........it was stated to obvious in the setup so i dont blame you for missin seeing it.........but yeh it was a topical about getting car jacked so uh you only lose cuz you did a battle verse and not the topic................

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Voted For: kkkhater

Weak Battle overall

KKKhater had a slightly betta structure both need to work on that...Punches from both of ya where hittin weak so dat was a tie..Vocab was decent from KKKHater but lawless had good punches so lawless took the punches..Flow i would say Hater took it this time...Personals was a tie and both need to elavate on that too....Mutlis was a tie

overall close battle but weak...I give it to KKKhater though

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Voted For: kkkhater

LOL - white wash 2 kkkh8r

did Lawless know it was a topical????

anyways Lawless errrmmmm- nxt time write abiut the topic lol

kkkh8r
-good imagery in places
-gd topic coverage
-elevate in yo vocab
-try and write a bot more nxt time
-develop ur story more - may come with more lines

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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

you got this in my opinio you had better punches although the flow was a bit choppy it didnt matter some of the lins i liked...

he puss n don't want a confrontation I'll murk em wit no conversation/
he couldn't spit 'hard shit' if u had a severe case of constipation/
^^ good punch and good opener...

I see how you do how ya rhymes designed hoe/
and I noticed he spit riddles cause he couldn't be behind bars if he was Shyne Po/
^^ another good punch well done

kkkhater yours was more of a story than a battle so you dont get my vote but this was an alright battle in my opinion... keepit it up and keep elevating