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(x) CeEd 1 16.67%
MaRVJay1009 5 83.33%
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Old 12-31-04, 05:43 PM   #16
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009

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checkin polls....glad to hear that u joining mindz kollide marv......
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Old 12-31-04, 06:06 PM   #17
(X)eed
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lawless shut the fuck up drop a vote or fuck outta this site
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Old 12-31-04, 06:54 PM   #18
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Voted For: (x) CeEd

OK breakdown....

(x) CeEd:

MIC CHEK
^^^get rid of this
Kid's stupid...acts like hes won nothin' except The Miss World,
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH...shit we just found out that Marv's a Girl,
^^^^^NO.... wack flow.. wack punch... WACK concept
No Worries MaRVJay>>>>> Just turn your name to MaRV's Gay
now your allowed to join the Saturday mornin' Gay Parade,
^^^first line... lol... but wack... second line... very weak
now MaRV mite attack me for me bein' a Kiwi..................
MArVs wack, hes like the Herman without the PEE-WEE,
first line.... NO... second... an aight concept... not bad
But no Beef MArV, you have dope lines and some good flow,
You can pick up guy's now, like they were your blonde hoes,
omg.... ^^^1st lines... this is a battle... dont stick up for your opponent.... second line... give it a rest with this gay shit
has "1009" at the end of his name,kid's old.... i own this game
I will roll him like i wuz rollin a dice.. Christ, your like the Obie
without the TRICE
^^^the 1009 thingy.... YOU FUCKED THAT UP... that was a concept which could have been a god personal... but nooo... ...I own this game.... you went into self glorifyand the last line... was just fucking gay.... so really you fucked this verse.... it was wack flow... that was no personals... punches were weak... you ended up saying good shit bout your oppenent.... and the verse was newbeish..
....nuff said...

ok.... marv..... im not even gonna break down your verse... its was soo fucking newbeish..... get them fucking " things out of your fucking verse... they insult the fucking readers... your verse was crap.... they was not structure in it... your multies were wack.... the personals made no fucking sense at all... basically just shut the fuck up... its was a pathetic verse... you got a problem with me saying this shit then pm me and we'll battle.....
your both newbs.... elevate
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Old 12-31-04, 08:22 PM   #19
(X)eed
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lol^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ my man 4fil hahahah fuk up lol uppin...................
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Old 01-01-05, 03:11 PM   #20
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

LOL I like this battle but heres how i feel

Ceed
You did great mayne you always elevating and thats wat I Like bout you but Still Marv came Harder And Thatz why i Gotta go on his side ..................IU didnt see anything wrong wit ya verse xcept like yo structure all Those Punct. Marks make it look ugly remember that mayne ........now

Marv
I Like ya verse it was a perfect example of what I Verse should be ...............Except Ya Structure mayne leave all Those Marks out if ppl dont know how to read a Rap verse then thats They Ass Thats why ppl state That If you dont understand then You dont Vote ......so There keep up the good work Both Of You

RTF RTF RTF RTF RTF RTF.....I only Have one Battle.....RTF
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