vote=mc4eyez better wordplay and flow some nice multis too. i like the flow over the other they were pretty close on punches but the mechanics was what won this

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

I missed these the first time:

- You spit a couple good bars, and that's nice to say
- But even a broken clock is on time twice a day

Hahahahahahahha!

very close battle


trushoka - vocab was ok, punches were hitting nice metas

mc-punches were decent, vocab was iight, wordplay was good


but in the end shoka got this

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both were tight. this was a close battle that was well worth reading. ima go wid...erm...

hmm..

erm...tru $hocka

No hate, but I'd appreciate a little more feedback in some of the votes. If you're voting against me, tell me what I could have done better. I just want to elevate.

Peace

nice battle...

both came strong with a nice flow and sum nice punches,it was close.

for me,i think tru came that lil bit stronger than 4eyes,with a lil more creative wordplay and less played and slightly harder punches.

4eyez verse was nice, flowed well, with sum nice punches, but was juss that lil bit more played and a lil bit too simple, was real close tho...

vote=TRU SHOCKA

~pz~

This was a coo battle.

Tru...

Kids Obsessed With My Text, Stalks Me In School And Takes Notes...
Whats Next? Make Your Own Punctuation Book Just To Create Quotes...
(very nice, good punch)

Always Asks His Friends To Pop His Cork To Get The Party Jumping...
After This An Air Compressor Couldn't Keep Your Heart Still Pumping...
(lol, humor mixed wit dexterity. Good one)

4eyez...

Read my verse backwards, the result is the same, like it says "race car"
I've seen more interesting verses than yours written with just the space bar
(lol, this shyt had me laughin)

I'm like the "Make A Wish" foundation, so just sit right there
And I'll make your dream come true, as long as it's a nightmare
(lolol, another funny ass punch)

Testing me was a mistake, and soon you'll see the blunder
People who read your text become jealous of Stevie Wonder
(lmao)

If you want to compete, rise to my echelon quick
Or else you'll be down on you luck like you're sucking Leprechaun dick
(lol)

Both verses were good, but I think 4eyez took this one. His punches were more effective and verse was more entertaining to me. One Hunnid.

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