Ha! Naw, the admin took it out...

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0-1 uppin for more. i really aint think onslaughts verse was that good, but maybe it was just me.
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come on yall. lets get some votes.
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ONSLAUGHT


I relentlessly defeat whack emcees with burnin intensity/
And spit flames like I drank baccardi and spat with two stoves next to me/

OK OPENER NOT REALLY FEELING THIS,IT WAS A COOL SETUP,BUT I FELT THE STOVE LINE WASNT REALLY A GOOD HARD HITTING PUNCH,IT WASNT BAD,BUT I FEEL NO EFFECTIVNESS FROM IT


K? I’ll leave you to ride the rest of my D-I-C/
The only way this kid will be V-I-P, is if he borrowed two letters from his H-I-V/

BOO AT THIS,NOT FEELING IT AT ALL WAS VERY WEAK


This whore looking around like he’s got A-D-D/
Couldn’t ‘add’ my wins together, from a 2 man spree/

AGAIN WASNT FEELING THIS,PRETTY WEAK MAN


Killing not shopping, bodies not bags, be dropping/
The top of my drink, be the only thing this kid is topping/

FILLER SHIT HERE


This whore is like a cheese curl, cause he’s dangerously cheesy/
And he’s a lot like the S-A-T’s, cause he’s unexpectedly easy/

NOT FEELING THIS MAN,NOT A GOOD SETUP AND PUNCH COMBO,PRETTY WEAK

I’m battlin 2 hards to cum, must be a fag crew or somethin/
Yelling, “Let’s start the gay party” would be the only way Relentless would send me runnin/

OK,NOT PARTICULARLY EFFECTIVE,SETUP FILLER,BLAH


And finally, with a single punch, I’ll stab you in the heart with your ribs/
And with a single kick, introduce your guts to your kids…/

THIS WAS THE ONLY LINES I LIKED OUT OF YOUR WHOLE VERSE GOOD ENDING ALSO


Nefarious, or Canibus, I really can’t tell who’s who/
Because you’re so far on his dick in looks like 1 man instead of just 2/

DECENT PERSONAL MAN,I SAW HIS SIG,MADE ME LAUGH A BIT,DECENT SHIT



You’re in The Depths of the Shallow Minded, so get out of Rententless’s head/
No life could live in there, neither of you have posted, prolly already dead/

AGAIN FILLER,NOT LIKEING SHIT LIKE THAT


For this fagot, cum hard, rarely, speak soft like a fairy/
He’ll need magic dust just to loose, but just barely/

BLAH NOT FEELING IT


Fruity like a berry, reminds me of Chucky, this baby-dolls just not scary/
Get spat in his face, with rough flows, cause I drink Cherry Coke/

PART FILLER HERE,KNEW WHERE YOU WERE GOING,BUT NOT FEELING IT.


And pussies like this step up and get cherry poked/
And it’s a shame that I’ll be given the win, before you can even begin/

BOO AT THIS



Like mike Tyson, fightin, Lennox again/
Your weak like a day, bitch, weak in your end/

BLAH


You like penetration, prolly why you so ‘deep’ with ya men/
Sometimes your deep in with a pen, get in touch with ya Zen/
You’ll need every part of your brain to even think you’ll beat me my friend/

NOT A GOOD ENDING,YOUR VERSE WAS OK,NOT PARTICULARLY HARD HITTING OR EFFECTIVE IN MY EYES


RELENTLESS

O.S. Kickin your fragial lyrics, no wonder they stay
broke
You couldnt strike me as dope, if you pitched a ball made of
coke

NOT BAD OF A OPENER,SETUP WAS COOL,PUNCH WAS GOOD PLAYED CONCEPT THOUGH

go ahead, I'll let you take a seat in a chair full of spring
coils
I renoylds wrap your thoughts just to leave your plans
foiled

NOT TOO BAD,AGAIN RENOYLDS WRAP IS PRETTY MUCH PLAYED SHIT,BUT DECENT


you a ill emcee, thats a lie just look inside his
text
when you heard you could get males(mail) on the computer you jumped up for cyber sex

SORTA MADE ME LAUGH,COOL NOT BAD


markin dayz on a calender, is the only time you gettin some
dates
you could be a Navy recruiter, but still couldnt Seal my
fate (Navy Seal)

OKAY SHIT


this newspaper rappers gets free magazines, no wonder you got issues
tears of sorrow, need to dry your eyes? then i rip out your brain tissue

BOO AT THIS NOT FEELING THIS AT ALL,NOT HARD.

I dont care if your lungs in tact, I take you out a
breathin position
cuz on-slaught my lethal decriptions will birth the antidote like
fetal prescriptions

OKAY

you from baltimore? Then I'll lot your corpse Rave in(raven)
rot
cuz in this battle you was gambling wit death, but you was still
On-Slot (slot machines)

OKAY ENDING HERE,FELT THE PERSONALS OF HIS NAME,OKSHIT NOT BAD


seems like when you qouting canibus is the only time you havin fun wit your life
wanna be a mod? joggin between forums is the ony time you runnin this site

NICE OPENING ,NICE PERSONAL I WAS FEELING IT


dry lyrics, guess your rhymes is needin some
brute quenching
cuz your scripts leave everyone hangin like
group lynching

OKAY NOT TOO EFFECTIVE BUT COOL


beat you wit an american flag till you see
red, white, and blue
pull out your iris's, even thought you cant observe me you sayin I.C.U. (

DECENT SHIT,NOT TOO HARD BUT EFFECTIVE



this 'Grizzly' got you in a painful submission, and you cant even 'bear it'
I'm causin you so much aggressive stress, you runnin to put on some arrid

BLAH AT THIS,NOT FEELING IT

you had nightmares when you found out we was battlin, I got ya fearin this
cuz I stay on point just like the tip of a
pyramid
Lev you gettin a win is like the world trade center, it
doesnt exsist

AGAIN NOT FEELING THIS,SHOULD OF REWORDED IT BETTER,AND TRADE CENTER SHIT IS WAY TOO PLAYED NOW



pu**y lyrics that come out ya mouth, no wonder niggas dicks stay humpin ya lips
all your rhymes is wack, and seems like you
rambling on to me
But I always have fun rippin up these
canibus wannabes

OKAY ENDING,NOT TOO HARD,HAVE TO REMEMBER TO COME HARD HERE


NEFARIOUS LEV


Repitwa got me faced against these weak MC's...undetected hidden dragon attackin', flippin' from monastery canopies to trees//
with a swift breeze, and intense quickness I slay and bring upon the dead of the day....a hex in a sacred text and lick their guts from the edge of the blade//

NOT TOO BAD OF AN OPENER,LOT OF VOCAB HERE,WITCH STRETCHED YOUR PUNCHES,NOT REALLY FEELING THAT


unimaginable flames on two faggots who hold hands....this is your final destination, I'm deliverin' death's design with untold plans//

OKAY,DECENT PUNCH


I have an intention to severely slaughter you....what I didn't do is the only thing I'll give a thought or two//
Rhymin' intricately, even when put simple I'm still too vivid with metaphors for your simplistic shit....shove a rusted dagger tip pass your pharynx down your esophagus until your trachea connects with it//

HAH NICE VISUAL HERE,LIKE SHIT LIKE THIS,BUT YOUR WORDPLAY WAS ALITTLE TOO STRETCHED


continue deeper til I reach your diaphragm at a 45 degree angle smooth....stab it into ya lungs, leave it there and begin to savagely strangle you....
til your eyes bulge out blood shot red....and let the pain continue to torture if by then you're not dead//
Your vital signs of winnin' have clearly been diminished...I vanish all chances of a loss by creatin' a perfect murder image//

DECENT SHIT AGAIN,LIKE THE VISUAL,BUT AGAIN YOUR WORDPLAY IS DIMINSHING CAUSE THE LINES ARE WAY TO STRETCHED.


Poundin' you with primitive caveman hits from fists like I racist that hates you hoe....water your chances of winnin' when you're braggin' that you flow like H2O//
Onslaught's demise gave you watered eyes, I got Relentless mourning death....couldn't create flames drinkin' aerosol and spittin' with a dragon's hot morning breath//

OKAY SHIT HERE,LIKE I SAID UP THERE,STRETCHED SHIT,THATS WHY YOUR SHIT ISNT GETTING TOO EFFECTIVE


You bean weak listenin' to ya friends and got all gassed up....It's like R.Kelly feedin' you jalepenos laced with laxatives cause my verse's eatin' yo ass up//
I'm trouble to you if you're lookin' for a W, shiiiit, kid you should've went for the V....blowin' the competition away like an active tornado zone, you bitches shouldn't have wind against me//

NOT BAD OF AN ENDING,I LIKED YOUR VERSE BUT IT WAS WAY TO STRETCHED AND SHIT,SORTA NOT TOO MY LIKING OR IT WOULD OF BEEN IF YOU CUT BACK ON THE EXCESSIVE WORDPLAY


VOTE IS FOR RELENTLESS I FELT HIS VERSE WAS THE BEST OUT OF THE THREEE,HE HAD SOME EFFECTIVE PUNCHES,SOME PLAYED SHIT,BUT HIS VERSE WAS THE EASIEST TO READ OUT OF THE THREE,ONSLAUGHT I THOUGHT CAME WITH AN OK VERSE SOME PLAYED SHIT,AND LOTS OF FILLER,NEFARIOUS I LIKED YOUR SHIT MAN,BUT YOUR VOCAB IS TOO MUCH,ITS COOL TO HAVE SOME VOCAB BUT IT EXCEEDED THE LIMITS,THE LINES WERE WAY TO STRETCHED AND I LIKED THE VISUALS OF YOUR VERSE,IF YOU WORK ON IT YOU WILL BE A FORCE TO BE RECKONED WITH


VOTE RELENTLESS

Ya I don't think I did too well in this battle either, I typed a bunch of junk up real quick cause I was busy, and I had 2 peeps to battle, didn't put any effort into it... It's ok though, I'm looking forward to next week, uppin for more votes, peace

SORRY ABOUT NOONE VOTEING,I GUESS NOONE LIKES READING 3 WAYS


ONSLAUGHT- 1-0



RELENTLESS- 1-0



NEFARIOUS LEV- 1-0