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01-03-05, 10:05 PM
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ROFL LMAO at willa peer damn u were off beat nice lyrics tho like 20 grand i think he owned the song LE nice flow nice lyrics overall nice track
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01-03-05, 10:30 PM
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Wow, not bad guys, the first guy needs to work on flow a little bit, and willa, what happened? lol,its all good girl,i know what your capable of, good lyrics by all tho..not a bad hook, it was aiight...keep it up..1
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01-04-05, 01:08 AM
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damnit it wasnt my fault lol read the posts le fucked it up
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01-04-05, 01:11 AM
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A'ight I think I fixed it...I'll get at you on AIM...
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01-04-05, 01:29 AM
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IP: 00D1 1A9E
waiting
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01-04-05, 01:48 AM
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FIXED. Peep it...don't wanna repost haha...will if I have to...
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01-04-05, 10:51 AM
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IP: 4425 3C10
better, im still not feeln her verse, but it may just be her.. lol idk good job though
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01-04-05, 02:04 PM
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quality on the hook could be a little better....something sounds off, but it fits the beat real nice......first verse.....flow is shaky, seems like you odnt have very good breath control, work on that, lyrics are "ok", nothing special really....but not bad...delivery is decent, but needs some improvement, try to make people believe what your saying, you kinda sound like your just reading off of paper or somethin.....
2nd verse...is dude like 12?...lol, flow is ok....not to many falloffs....deliver is ok, but to be honest im not believin these lyrics just cuz of his voice, thats just my opinion, im not sayin its impossible...lol...but whatever, decent verse homie... decent track yall....both need some improvements but thats the point of spittin, find where u need to elevate... peep mine... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169832 |
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