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01-08-05, 03:58 PM
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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP:
no break down needed
Ill, your structure was fucked to shit. really no need for the highlight either. explanations are wack. punches were really weak. u need to try and be more creative most of ya verse was stretched. Nice verse prem. not great but decent punches, nice structure. basically, u took this. v/ Prem |
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01-08-05, 06:56 PM
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The Text Rex
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IP:
Vote: Premaniton easy
Clear to see. He had much wittier punchlines and all that. Ill.Logic, your structure and overall rhymescheme needs a lot of work. With work, you'll come out okay. At least, after you recover from this beating... Vote: Premanition
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01-08-05, 11:53 PM
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Still Spectacular, Yes!
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IP:
mite i reeiterate..the um...self..glorification lol..
  i give it to Prem becuz he stayed consistently good throughout..hsi punches were consistent and i felt his verse thru and thru...Ill..playah i felt ya shit da first and last bar...erything in between had me bangin my head ya digg.... V/Prem Stay UP..good batle
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01-15-05, 10:33 AM
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IP:
Both had good drops...
Ill.L yo lines were just too stretched though but tha punches were aight, just work on yo structure tho, but Prem took this one though no hate 2 both. . . 1... |
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01-15-05, 10:28 PM
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IP:
damn.......this is a wrap.............................
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