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Old 01-04-05, 09:12 PM   #16
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gimme some feed an I'll return tha favor
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Old 01-04-05, 09:24 PM   #17
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Your rhyming was actually decent, and you kept an ok structure together. Your flow was not to bad, and you got your point across.

Now read this, click the links, and laugh at a herb, for what you wrote just fit in amazingly well to what your about to see.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=166416&page=2

That's the om I dropped.

Below is an incredibly retarded persons response. Dont' worry keep reading yes, it gets better.

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Originally Posted By Pysco (flipped name)
nice BITE BITCH

wanna link cause you got it off me

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149881
nice try


Now it may look like I have bit it, but OH NO! I actually wrote it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=Insect+Society

I'm Given Light off rb, and he bit my om, for his battle. If you need proof look at the dates. I DROPPED my verse in august.
His THREAD was OPENED in september.

So instead of Giving feedback, make fun of this fucking retarded herb for accusing me of biting. When he bit off me, than trys to bust my ass for it.

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Old 01-04-05, 09:28 PM   #18
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Damn bra dats fuked up
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Old 01-04-05, 09:31 PM   #19
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I know it really pissed me off.
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Old 01-04-05, 10:01 PM   #20
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hell yeah well the him to come an read my shit maybe he'll get an idea
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Old 01-05-05, 08:43 AM   #21
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gimme mo feedbac I'll return tha favor
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Old 01-05-05, 07:21 PM   #22
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come on yallllllll uppppppppppppin feedbac
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Old 01-05-05, 07:54 PM   #23
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Old 01-05-05, 08:00 PM   #24
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thanx Explizit........................uppin
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Old 01-05-05, 10:59 PM   #25
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yo son dat shyt wuz wack, cuzoo, first of all i wuz baq thurr at RAPBATTLES, and i'm vet i don't even need to steel ya shyt niggga, i wuz juss sayin', cauze i gotz a hook lyke dat on ma song/ demo dat i juss made, me and ma bwoyz made dat shyt up igght cuz, i lyke ya diss, itz sick but yo i'm not gonn' diss cauze i kno i didnot bite shyt, ya heard peace nigggga
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Old 01-05-05, 11:03 PM   #26
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yo son dat shyt wuz wack, cuzoo, first of all i wuz baq thurr at RAPBATTLES, and i'm vet i don't even need to steel ya shyt niggga, i wuz juss sayin', cauze i gotz a hook lyke dat on ma song/ demo dat i juss made, me and ma bwoyz made dat shyt up igght cuz, i lyke ya diss, itz sick but yo i'm not gonn' diss cauze i kno i didnot bite shyt, ya heard peace nigggga


Bra I wasn't even talkin bout u I talkin but tha other cat called Young Twista
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Old 01-06-05, 08:37 PM   #27
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I like it

It has a Nice wordplay It was very Original ........................except You first Bar Was weak i jus hade to Tell you that But the rest was great

keep up the Good work
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Old 01-06-05, 08:50 PM   #28
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Thanx king.............................

Mo feedbac yall I'll return tha favor
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Old 01-06-05, 10:47 PM   #29
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come on people do Unknown a favor give him some more feedback
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Old 01-06-05, 11:29 PM   #30
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wtf was that...lmao

ok first of all your vocab was played and weak...there wasent realy anything creative about your lines you spat.....most of your lines were forced and i jsut pretty much didnt understand at all....and please dont say im a newbie cuz i would str8 werk you...but sry man thats what i feel...pz...3/10

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