Ehhhh.....not really good bat doing those topics... i kinda do a story type of topical kinda describing more in rhymes......ehhh... i really dont go original on my topics that much... dunno.... dont ask....
i thought i flowed better....but ehh you get the win......

I'll edit my links tomorow.... fuck.. i'm sleepy as hell...

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V/ Verbal

Both were good verses. Basically the reasons everyone else was giving would explain my vote for Verbal. Loved the approach you took to the topic, very creative, I know I wouldnt have thought of anything like that.

hmm paramik your verse was dope... vocab just enough there... imagery was pretty good... emotion was definately better than VA's... you were pretty consistent... everything fell into it's place.. and you followed the topic better

overall :9/10

verbal abuse: i think everyone voted for you because of the amazing wordplay which i found good also, but i dont think you wrote the topic as well as paramik... he got deeper and more emotional with it... yours did also but not enough to get my vote... the vocab wasnt too great but not bad.. good imagery good consistency.. structure was decent for the most part but para got this one

vote: paramik

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Battle Ends In A Tie

Verbal Abuse +3
Paramik +3

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