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Voted For: Invektive


im cut out ya heart and slit both ya wrists, you cant battle me, ill bump you up like radioactive scists,

my style is blunt and heavy, you might dodge a ford but ill smack you wit my chevy,

im ready for this emcee ta spit, cuz i brought toilet paper ta clean up his shit

i slay emcees like hercules,at the end of this rap youll be screamin noooooo please,

call me the toaster cuz i fry, you know your gonna lose kid dont cry

i tap bitches like austin powers, this mc doesnt take showers, ill knock yo ass flat like the twin towers,

my freestyle shit contains more wit than your spit, i bet your blind now kid you cant handle it,

ill be knockin you out like tyson lewis, why would you battle me you knew you would lose this,

you have alotta balls to battle phive you must have big nuts, cuz ill be searchin through ya stomach and rippin out ya guts

now youre done son, i played with ya head, you cant battle live, cuz ya rhymes are dead
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Dont space between bar's, its messing up the flow fam. Punches were good, with some wordplay's and meta'z. Flow was BOOOOOOOOO. Elevate homie.







When it comes to Phives rap skills.......this guys deprived
I dont usually battle dudes who's more fruit than FIVE alive
phive tries with weak punches.....ha......but he's left hookin and missin
Ima Bake you......but you should know that since you cook for a living *
i got the crookedest visions, but i know you wack when it comes to rap as well
because in music.."breathing outwards" is the only way you'd "excell" (exhale)
this dude gets ate, if he was "pushin fat kids" in the game...he still couldnt "move no weight"
i laughed when u accepted the battle......with a record of two and eight
get punched till u blue in face......with your elementary rhymes
I ripped this fucker to shreds.........you lucky i came weak this time
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Nice verse, punches was decent and hard. Flow was good. Personals was good.





overall= One-side battle, Invektive pulled it off, with hard punches that were really effective and some good personals, with some good flow. Phive your verse was "ok" good wordplay and meta'z, punches was ok. Invektive came harder with the punches fam. No hate.




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Voted For: Invektive

V/invektive......he gets my vote hands down because his verse had punchs an vocab wit structure....he came harder...phive u need to elavate ur verse wasn't as hard hittin as invek ur structure was off an u had no really hard punchs.....no hate juss elavate.....
punchs=-invektive
vocab=invektive
structure=invektive
overall=invektive
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Voted For: Invektive

damm dis shit was very wun sided.....no hate 2 5 but u aitn stand a chance fam

opener-inv
structure-inv...hands down
punchlines-inv
creativity-inv
wordplay-nun
multis-inv...had a few
personals-inv..da first bar
finisher-a tie
enjoyed-inv.....5 ya lines are 2 long seperate dem shits or nobody will understand em

RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS R IN DA SIG
enjoyed

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^^he's scared.lol

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Voted For: Invektive

no doubt invek got this one he did not have any stretched lines even tho you could use more vocab homes but you beat him in punches personal and opener-closure and overall you're imagry was better and ur flow and structre was easier to follow. But over all invek gets this one and plz hit up on my links peace.

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