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Old 07-19-02, 03:44 PM   #1
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Upping this battle...

I know I won but upping anyway...

It's 1-0 my lead...

Or Dark you can just give up...lol

UPPING...
 
Old 07-20-02, 03:31 PM   #2
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Still upping this battle...

Somebody vote!

1-0 lead...

UPPING FOR VOTES!

Dark what you did? Told everybody not to vote? lol
 
Old 07-20-02, 04:06 PM   #3
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a.] just shut the fuck up.
b.] stop upping soo much.
c.] your not as good as you think.
d.] refrain from getting on shadows dick.
 
Old 07-20-02, 05:04 PM   #4
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I'll "turn the other cheek" poor DarkSkyz never knew what he was about-to-"face"
Cause my blows will leave him like Oprah Winfrey..."swolen and out-of-shape"
starting bar was nice punch


I'm constantly shattering your skull with a force to break-raps
I laugh hysterically cause DarkSkyz brags with a voice lighter than his weight-class
this almost had me cracken up
I lose?...how can you say that? I'll literally leave you abused-and-broken
This fool-was-hoping, we never discovered he banged the Kool Aid man just to get his "juices-flowing" (ewww)
good line.. meta was a nice punch
I'm too hot and fool you know this, my battle verses rip-organs
You would've thought Miss Cleo died the way all Dark's bars are a "misfortune" (missed fortunes)
first bar seemd like a filler, follow through was nice
I'll put his lines amidst torment, within minutes of typing-my-verse
His style has been "dead" on Rapbattles...he needs to stop "dickriding-a-hearse"
decent
My punches violently burst, to emit pesticide on this nagging-rodent
Seeing this faggot-flowing, with no skills is a
3 linked chain I've gladly-broken
Kinda weak
And sadly spoken, this is the type of sh*t I use to break-hoes
Cause being dislexic and saying "okay" is the only thing you know about a KO
Kinda tight

Over All Id rate This Like A 8.7 for A Verse, You Just needed More Personal Punchs, Your metaphors were good, multis coulda been a little better.. Your rhyme shceme was ok..




I see you always home, and you ‘often on’, well Im testing you ‘testosterone’, grab a thousand mics and then I strike, slice you flesh to my delight and then just ‘toss-ya-bones’//
[b]Ok starter.. Rhyme scheme On It Was pretty Ill

It would ‘be-wise’ to retract you words, if not, soon you will ‘see-why’, crack your shins through your skin, and have you standing ‘knee-high’, this win is leading to your ‘di-mise’//
Eh. this One Was alright.. Metaphor Was Nice tho
Rushing to me to post, but now that I have, I see no ‘verbal reactions’, beat your body into ‘multiple fractions’, and pierce your lungs till it causes ‘compulsive contractions’//
Good Vocab in This Bar[/n]
I know my bait is off the ‘hook’, but my prey is to ‘fish men’, I see when the gun cocked, your jaws lock, and you pissing-the-Simpsons while your mouth is flooded with a river of crimson//
[b] Nice multi, Fish Man Part was Tight


Over all This Verse was Like A 7.8.. your Metaphors Were Alright, Punchs Were str8, Coulda came more Peronsal tho... ANd your Dragging Some of Your bars To Long, Its Throwing, Off You Rhyme Scheme

vote=The Prophet

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Old 07-20-02, 05:41 PM   #5
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YEA THIS WAS A NICE BATTLE ON THE REAL...I FEEL BOTH EMCEES CAME HARD BUT I THINK THAT THE PROPHET GOT THIS BATTLE.....

PROPHET....

I lose?...how can you say that? I'll literally leave you abused-and-broken
This fool-was-hoping, we never discovered he banged the Kool Aid man just to get his "juices-flowing" (ewww)

LOL MADE MY ASS LAUGH...

DARK SKYZ...

I know my bait is off the ‘hook’, but my prey is to ‘fish men’, I see when the gun cocked, your jaws lock, and you pissing-the-Simpsons while your mouth is flooded with a river of crimson//

NICE SHIT NIGGA...

PROPHET CAME A LIL HARDER IN THIS BATTLE THEN DARK SKYZ.....PROPHET HAD SOME NICE PUNCHES,NICE METAS...AND SOME COO MULTIS...GOOD BATTLE YALL

VOTE=PROPHET...

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Old 07-21-02, 12:42 AM   #6
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You don't have to like me, but you have to adapt to me...

3-0 I win...

K.O.
 
 


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