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marvjay1009 5 71.43%
poetry2abeat 2 28.57%
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Old 01-22-05, 12:58 PM   #1
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This was feedback posted for poetry2abeat

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Old 01-22-05, 01:09 PM   #2
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Voted For: poetry2abeat

Aii Ima Have to give my vote to Poetry2abeat because he came really good wit the Punchez and personals but also did Marv but still Poetry was alot better and thats just how i fell so i jus gonna give my vote to Poetry 2 a beat because I Was jus fellin his alot more
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Old 01-22-05, 09:10 PM   #3
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uppin and stop fukkin hatin damm
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Old 01-22-05, 09:20 PM   #4
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

v/marvjay1009.....this was a good battle but my vote goes to marv he came wit harder diss's an was more creative wit the punchs.....
punchs=marv
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Old 01-22-05, 10:42 PM   #5
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good battle marv but every battle ive read from you was so ething always dealing trees and leave? why that?
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Old 01-23-05, 08:04 AM   #6
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aite dis is how i see it...
its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag?
nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag"
^1st line, 4/10 no punch, 2nd line 6/10 hard punch.

admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week......
when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH"
1st line again justa set up for 2nd line 3/10..2nd line gd wordplay but eh not hard 5/10

u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me
i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........
again notha set up 1st line 3/10 2nd line decent

your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL....
u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell"
gd bar decent punch gotta giv it 6/10.

i bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE..
plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME"
1st line waz decent not a direct punch, 2nd line gd play on hiz crews name 7/10

Overall marv u had a solid drop so i think u won dis u were more consistent and complex compared 2 poetry2abeat RTF in my sig u kno how it iz.

your hated at this site so its best you leave,
you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves,
[B]no hard punch 2/10

after reading what i wrote you wished you declined,
your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind,
Not a gd set up, but 2nd line waz shaky, kinda played BUT decent

couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak
cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats,
Wack meta in da 1st line, 2nd line IS PLAYED AS FUCK

marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject,
like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect,
1st line is fake, how can u b a reject??2nd line decent

having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling,
but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling"
[B]1st line waz jus WACK,2nd line not bad gd meta


Overall not very gd, u shud do poetry cuz u realli need 2 elevate, no hate, but u werent as hard hitting az marv...
RTF MARVJAY
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