Voted For: QueEns KiLLa

u won dis fam i couldn't understand nothin phive was sayin cuzz of his nasty ass structure...

opener-killa
structure-killa..hands down
punchlines-killa
creativity-killa
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-killa had about 1
finisher-killa
enjoyed-killa....

return da favor links in da sig

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

OH MY GOD, this is the 3rd shit I've seen in front line where voters are fucked up!
Now I dont know anyone in this fuckin thread. OK?
So my opinion aint a dickride one, its from a bystander who cant sit here and look at votes that are bogus! Ok, maybe this is a fuckin newbie forum...if so non of yall muthafuckas vote on my battles, becuz EITHER yall dick/clit riding, OR yall dont know what compents of a rhyme are (multi, punches, metas,) all that.
Now notice above these 2 voters said no multi's.

Go to Phives verse, and i just pick out a line full of multi's easily:
"i spit bars that spark fires, fast like car tires, im cuttin you up like barb wires,"
So u must assume yall dont know what MULTIple sllyable/word rhyming
is. Yall dont understand the concept of it? But yet u vote?
Ok let me give a fast lesson.
If in ONE bar you are rhyming 2 words, at least 3 times within that ONE bar.... you are using multi's!
Here is an example newbies: "i spit bars that spark fires, fast like car tires, im cuttin you up like barb wires,"
See the underlined words? That is called Multiple Word Rhyming within a bar!
Also if u use 3 or more words WITHIN one bar, in which the syllables rhyme....that is also called multiple syllable rhyming!
here is example:
Its EVIDENT, the ignorance or rhyme scheme here is Prevalent!
Now I'm hesitant to even make Rap Verse my permanent residence!
Ok, in this rhyme scheme, each word has 3 syllables, which all rhyme! This is yet another facet of Multi's! Come on now voters, step ur voting game up! Be fair! U will get hella respect for that!
PEACE

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Voted For: QueEns KiLLa

V/Queens Killa.......this was a close battle but Killa gets my vote because he had sum punchs an used them creatively also his structure mad it easy to read.....phive ur verse had sum good lines but u lacked in beenin consistent wit the punchs an ur structure needs work....no hate ....good battle to both...
punchs=Killa
Vocab=Killa
opener=killa
closer=killa
structure=killa
multi's=(none really)
overall=Queens KiLLa
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queens killa do u fukkin vote on battles...damm u got 9 posts vote nigga stop sitin ond a frontlines just lookin at shit

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

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uppin fo some votes from some playas not posers yall know ill return tha favour

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yo uppin on this battle playassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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