Voted For: MC IgGY

winner - MC IGGY


Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*

good wordplay

So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,

decent punch, not too strong

This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there

nice line


On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',

pretty strong punch,


Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"

weak punch

Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**

ok finisher


mc iggy's verse

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE

nice punch,

I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN

hot punch, nice multis

You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND

nice wordplay, decent punch

Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS

funny punch

what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.

could of had a stronger finisher but this one was ok



flow-tie
multi- MC
punches-MC
wordplay-ONESTEP
opener-ONESTEP
finisher-MC

uppin for votes...................................

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uppin for votes..... keep em' comin people.........

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comon peepz, if u vote for me, ill vote for u, fair votes only plz

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Mc IGGY- Alright man, you've elevated much. You got some good punches in there, flow was kinda fucked up......Dont put CAPS at the end of your sentence.....structure needs help.....Had some good wordplays.



OneStepBeyond- All right nice flow, with some good punches and wordplay was good. Dont stretch your lines that much. Much elevation on punches....Add multi'z......




overall=This battle was close, due to the elevation from both heads.....Mc Iggy nice verse with some good punches, flow was chopped up though, elevate on structure....Wordplay's was good, keep doing it...add some multi'z too.....onestepbeyond...nice verse fam with some good punches..but need elevation.....In my eyes...i think Onestepbeyond..got this...basically he had better effective punches with good flow....Mc iggy nice you've have elevated...but the punches werent hard enough....vote onestepbeyond for some harder punches and with good flow..wun

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i shoulda won already................. uppin bitches

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i swear if one more of my votes gets dqed ima kill somebody

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Voted For: MC IgGY

im gonna vote for you because I thought you were better, word

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checkin battle out....onestepbeyond......WELCOME to NOK if u want in.......good shit...

good drop iggy

Voted For: MC IgGY

had good flow wid good punches and good multies
had good structure needs some work on vocab but
overall i liked it more than onestepbeyond's flow
onestepbeyond had good flow and structure but needs to work on his vocab and multis
best mc iggy lines:
My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN

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uppin for more votes,
ill return the favor if u vote
honest votes only plz

comon peeps, uppin for more votes
ill return da favor

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
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ok the PUNCH was corny and older than GOD'S DAD
your multie needed improvement cuz it didn't exsist
OVER ALL STANDING ....NO ON THIS BAR
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So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
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C'MON......THERE WAS NO PUNCH,PERSONAL, BUT AT LEAST YA FLOW WAS GOOD
OVER ALL.....NO 4 THIS BAR
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This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
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HAHAHAHA....NO!.....THAT WAS WEAK AS FUCK TOO,,,MJ BARS ARE OLD TOO
OVER ALL .....NO 4 THIS BAR
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On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
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DO I REALLY HAVE TO EVEN CONSITER STATE'N WHY THIS 1 SUCKS?!
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Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
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ALMOST A CANIBUS QUOTE,....I THINK YOU NEED TO WORK ON YA SHYT MORE CUZ THIS AINT SHYT BUT TALKIN SHYT....NOOOOOOOO
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Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**
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UM...NO 4 THIS BAR
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1-10 YOU GET A ,..........2........... FROM ME

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
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THANX 4 THA WARNING...NOW THROW SOME PUNCHES
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I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
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THE BEST PUNCH,MULTIE'S I'VE SEEN IN THIS BATTLE

OVER ALL........ YES.....
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You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
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KEEP IT MOVE'N...YOU DO'N GOOD
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Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
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___YOU PLAY'ED THE KILLER IN SCARY MOVIE HUH?!___
THIS WAS OK BUT YOU NEED TO GET MORE PERSONAL AND MORE CREATIVE
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what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.
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AT LEAST ITS BETTER THAN HIS VERSE
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