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Old 07-21-02, 02:23 AM   #1
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His Verse Shows More 'Crack' Then Fat Plummers..!

lol

n other line that made me lough

kind of played but still jokes
 
Old 07-21-02, 02:23 AM   #2
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1-0 Uppin..!
 
Old 07-21-02, 04:21 AM   #3
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pretty good battle ya'll

both had a decent rhyme structure
punches, similes/metas,word play
hot shit kids

but i feel nigetic verbs <u.e>
took this one
he had a good amount of punches and personals at his disposal
and rar's seemed like it was written a week before the battle
(it was still hot tho)

yeah my vote goes to nigetic vebs(u.e)
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Old 07-21-02, 04:37 PM   #4
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I liked his punches and wordplay better....haha

Quote:
Originally posted by u.E.
Rar One..You Could Suck Mr. Hankey’s
Dick But Wouldn’t Be Able To ‘Blow Shit’..!
Know Your Role Bitch...Why Even Fight Me..?
When The Only Way Rar One Would Be ILL If
He Were To Bite Me..Kid Wants To Be Like
Me..Dont Talk When Im Speakin'..He Wrote
His Verse On Saturday And Sunday..No Wonder
He Had A Weak End..!(Weekend)


Rar you had some nice ones but your rhyme scheme went off at times....check

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Originally posted by rar one
Make Sure to Smash your Testicles ~ So I Know you Aint Got the Balls To Battle Me//
Nigga Could Match Flows If he Knew How to Clone Spits Through Electricity//
Your Winning List Like D12 Without a member ~You Aint got no Proof//
So Here lemmie Share Some Shit to Scare the Truth so Its Everclear//
Ill Twist The Judge's Pinky Up ~ So You Know you got a Thumbs Down//
Askin Why you Keep Screwing Up~ Cuz your Always Fucking Around//


I wasn't feelin' ya flow too much and that Proof line was nice but it didn't rhyme....plus u.E. had the wordplay...

Vote=u.E.
 
Old 07-21-02, 11:54 PM   #5
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Good Battle Rar One..No Beef Man..But Gimme My Points..Be Fair..Or I'll Report It To Skillz..LoL..Good Battle Tho..Pz..
 
Old 07-22-02, 01:14 AM   #6
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uppin..
 
Old 07-22-02, 03:54 PM   #7
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Dumb ass... Read the rules!

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Old 07-22-02, 04:15 PM   #8
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not sure if i have enough, but if i do then my vote goes to u.e. the opener he gave wiped out rar ones verse. true enough some of his shit was dome as hell like the saturday and sunday week end bar.....ummmmm no that was garbage.

But he gotta on this ne.


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Old 07-22-02, 04:33 PM   #9
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damn kid you wanna a kat to peep ya battle and spend half an hour voting pfffffff what a herb

rar-one's

You Beaten me with that Weak Verse ~ c’mon are you Serious//
I got a Heavier Flow ~ than Fat Women on there Periods//

{ didn't really like the first line, but the punch was decent }

Like a Struggling Actor ~ i See You Looking For Some New Lines
{ this was pretty ight}

Make Sure to Smash your Testicles ~ So I Know you Aint Got the Balls To Battle Me//
Nigga Could Match Flows If he Knew How to Clone Spits Through Electricity

{ this was a pretty nice personal }

Ill Twist The Judge's Pinky Up ~ So You Know you got a Thumbs Down//
Askin Why you Keep Screwing Up~ Cuz your Always Fucking Around
{nice visual personal decent punch}

The Shit You Spit Is why They say Dont Miss Rehersaul//
The Sick Homo you See on tv round 3 ~ The show Calld I Rap Like a Pussy

{didn't really like this finisher here it was iiiiiight}

Ningetic verbs or u.e's verse

Rar One..? I'll Easily Demolish Him..And Make This Kid Take More 'Shots' Then Drunk Alcoholic College Kids..!
Brawl With This Bitch..Threw This Kid In His Own Verse And Heard Him Scream "Help I've Fallen In Shit"..!

{ the opening line was kinda wack but that punch right there was pretty nice}

Rar One..You Could Suck Mr. Hankey’s
Dick But Wouldn’t Be Able To ‘Blow Shit’

{nice}

He Wrote
His Verse On Saturday And Sunday..No Wonder
He Had A Weak End..!
{nice personal}

And It's Funny Cuz Rar
One's Got More 'Played Lines' Then Basketball
Courts.

{decent punch}

He Tells Fagz He'll Have
Sex With Em' But Doesn't..Cuz Thats The Only Way
He'd Fuck With Niggaz Minds.

{decent personal}

From Low To High Numbers..! Dazed With Wonder..
His Verse Shows More 'Crack' Then Fat Plummers

{nice finsher}


ningetic verse was pretty ill
if you add what i said on top to this you got my whole explained vote

0-2 ningetic


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Old 07-23-02, 07:01 AM   #10
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2-0 Me..Bitch..You Lost Man..Face It..Faggot..
 
Old 07-23-02, 02:32 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally posted by Nefarious Lev
I liked his punches and wordplay better....haha



Rar you had some nice ones but your rhyme scheme went off at times....check



I wasn't feelin' ya flow too much and that Proof line was nice but it didn't rhyme....plus u.E. had the wordplay...

Vote=u.E.


^^^^I didn't see that 250 posts to vote I guess....well the vote's still the same...Your flow and rhyme scheme hopped off too much rar...
 
Old 07-24-02, 03:56 AM   #12
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3 - 0 Rar One..Give Me The Points And Don't Make A Bitch Excuse..Or Skillz Can Handle U Givin Me The Points..
 
Old 07-24-02, 11:27 PM   #13
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Uppin For My Points rar one..
 
Old 07-26-02, 12:51 AM   #14
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I Want My Points..Blah..
 
 


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