Voted For: Dominate

this hoe kat, i'm killing you with rymes you know that
i'll put more bullets to ur chest than the Wizards throwback
your verse serrated in dirt, how come u wasted ur words
shoulda been like E-40's Bentley and 'weighted your turn'
the crowd isn't rocking, they're doubting your hot shit
a true emcee can move the crowd, but not out of the concert
now ya in hysterics. confused and abused from comments
and i have shook the 'fuck outta ya' like reusable condoms
i can see it in your eyes that u dont want drama
but battlin me, i'm gonna start ya off with two l's like llamas.

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Dominate, like, damn, that verse was the best I have EVER read in FL. Seriously, you have to be alias. If you're not, then God damn you're a good newb. Dominate, dominated, seriously. Wasn't even close. Those bars I quoted were NICE. Fuck, i'm very im pressed. Gutter, work on everything. Structure, punches, wordplay, just everything. Dominate, just keep it up and you could be comin for my crown soon.

v-Dominate

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Soundclick

thanks for voting man, and i'm no alias, uppin for more votes.

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The Establishment

uppin.............................................

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The Establishment

jus checkin tha polls cuz..........................

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Voted For: Gutter Shad

dis was a weak battle but i give it to gutter shad for actually rhyming.....dominate u aint start rhyming untill like halfway in ur verse...i liked gutters closer also....
but shit and concert dont rhyme and
comments and condoms dont rhyme eitha....
v/gutter shad..
return da fuckin favor please...link below.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175096

yo my computer must be messed up or something....cuz ur whole verse didnt show up....ther was only like the first 4 lines.....i still cant see it but if thats ur verse dat socrates quoted den u won....i dunno what 2 do bout this....but yall cand dq i guess if u want 2

yeah that's my verse Socrates quoted, my whole verse, your comp really must be fucked up, cuz i was finna say this was an herd vote..lol

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The Establishment

yeh my bad yo..do what eva u want wit dat vote..dunno what 2 tell ya...

Voted For: Dominate

the crowd isn't rocking, they're doubting your hot shit
a true emcee can move the crowd, but not out of the concert
^^LMFAO ha nice opener too sic..
now ya in hysterics. confused and abused from comments
and i have shook the 'fuck outta ya' like reusable condoms
^^nice meta, good punch lol
i can see it in your eyes that u dont want drama
but battlin me, i'm gonna start ya off with two l's like llamas.
^^not too hot the last line was kinda wack...
Gutter vs Dominate, i guess brawl is certain
but u know ur ass is unsafe like prison without walls or curtains
^^another good punch has arrived.. this was nice..
your verse serrated in dirt, how come u wasted ur words
shoulda been like E-40's Bentley and 'weighted your turn'
^^nice closer... dayum nice punch and meta.
Those were the favorites in your verse.

Gutter there wasn't much to critique... you had some nice lines but the way you set them up were odd..
My plan is to disrespect you and your mother. You wear a strap but it has a cup size and assorted colors./
^^i thought this was kinda funny, u coulda made an ill punch with it tho..
And you claim you a thug but you running with chumps. And your girl gettin bust like pubertity bumps./
^^^second half decent, first half aight..
Your closer wasn't hot you need to work on those more than anything.. You need to end the battle with a bang, Dominate had some witty ass punches and metaphors was sic.. good combination.. he took this by a landslide.. my vote/ Dominate..
stay up
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