Voted For: New Era

this was an 1-sided battle all the way out:
opener: new era
vocab: n.e
structure: n.e
multis: both
closer: n.e
n.e just came harder & hit wit more effective punches thru out this battle; blaze u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes no hating
make sure 2 return the favor

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uppin dis shit honest and explained votes ONLY!!!!

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Voted For: .:BlazE:.

You battle me blaze god i think this stay's Faint
You shoot heavy artillary when u sprayin spray Paint
nope
There's nothin more for this dumby to set a battle with me
my Punches connect and stay so sticky, send pics u " CLICKIN on FIFTY "*
pretty decent here
This battle kat blaze is a straight fool lookin for some new tools
Try to get on my level home depot stands out you need some more stools
weak punch
Dont even try me i guess you think ya hard and junk nigka please
I put the force of my punches in my bullets so all u hear is the trigga squeeze
nah feel this one, could’ve been harder


Nobody has seen ur style, some call it a New Error,
When u rap its and tragedy, ur rhyming style is a big terror
decent punch
Im eatin dis beef up like breakfast, lunch, and dinner,
Lets start battling and find out whos da real winner
nah
Show u da real meanin of ur crew i jus Noked Out dis King,
My 3rd battle im claimin my 3rd win like patriots 3rd superbowl ring
decent

overall both had good structure, flow was aight, punches were decent
but overall to me, Kami took this one, just came a little harder in this battle

RTF Kamikaze

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7 Day Theory

Voted For: New Era

Didnt really take interest in neither but Ill give dis one ta Throwback cause his verse was better.It was also longer,so it was more feeling.

Kamikaze's verse was too short and full of too much self glorification.When u say u gonna win,and just dat,it really does nothin to da reader's choice.
Keep it up both

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Voted For: New Era

V/Text Crossover.....this was a onesided battle T came wit good creative punchs an vocab wit good wordplay an personals....Blaze u came wit punchs that were a little played an not as creative wit less vocab.....No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR...
Opener=t
Closer=T
Personals=t
Structure=T
Punchs=t
Multi's=t
Wordplay=t
Vocab=t
Overall=Text Crossover

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Voted For: .:BlazE:.

im givin' this one to kam bcuz he had better structure and his punches connected while text crossovers seem like he had put words were they dont belong

TEXT-5/10
KAM-7/10

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Voted For: New Era

You battle me blaze god i think this stay's Faint
You shoot heavy artillary when u sprayin spray Paint
OK opener..
There's nothin more for this dumby to set a battle with me
my Punches connect and stay so sticky, send pics u " CLICKIN on FIFTY "*
Didn't explain this............
This battle kat blaze is a straight fool lookin for some new tools
Try to get on my level home depot stands out you need some more stools
Good wordplay..
Dont even try me i guess you think ya hard and junk nigka please
I put the force of my punches in my bullets so all u hear is the trigga squeeze
Good closer...

Nobody has seen ur style, some call it a New Error,
When u rap its and tragedy, ur rhyming style is a big terror
OK.......
Im eatin dis beef up like breakfast, lunch, and dinner,
Lets start battling and find out whos da real winner
Set up was eh, no real punch on the second line...
Show u da real meanin of ur crew i jus Noked Out dis King,
My 3rd battle im claimin my 3rd win like patriots 3rd superbowl ring
Eh, not feeling it...

Hustla took this, he actually made some punches, better wordplay..ok closer, decent opener so all in all it was an ok spit..

Kam was just spitting rhetoric, he didn't really make any punches, and I wasn't really feeling the opener and closer

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Voted For: New Era

aight good battle both of yall but here is my breakdown

Hustla- good spit man i liked that shit.. flow was good throughout the verse... structure was pretty good except for 2 stretched lines but thats all good when you make it flow right and you did... personals were fairly hard hitting but the punches hit harder than his did... vocab was pretty nice overall.... all in all i give this verse a 7/10

Kami- aight this was a sub-par verse... i did like some aspects of it tho like you had ok vocab n' shit but the structure was ass... there was no sence of wordplay involved... punches and personals werent hard hitting at all i dont think... overall i would have to say elevate dawg... no hate tho- 4/10


overall id say this was a one sided battle pretty much but no hate to Kami cause he did his thing and i respect that shit... but i gotta give this one to hustla with an overall better battle verse.....


VOTE- HUSTLA