Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

close battle...both were tight

miss fyre....i was feeling yours, up till the end, thats were you kinda lost me, didnt like how you played out the end, with that other dude killin her, but you had good emotion, the vocab at the start was awesome, really got me into it, but then i stated to fade at the end...i think you lost alotta flow and wordplay dropped a little, you didnt keep that consistancy and i think if you did, you may have taken it....but because your ending got a little choppy and you lowered the vocab and wordplay, you lost hold of the battle, cause i just wasnt feeling it anymore at the end....but keep this shit up, your a good writer

Supervillain...i guess thats why you get my vote....you two seem about on the same level....but you kept a consistency of emotion and passion, mixed with vocab and wordplay throughtout your whole verse...and thats what really gets me, somethin that will keep me on the edge the whole time, i feel you did that better here, good flow, good use of multis at the start, structure was okay, creativity was great, had complexity, good verse man

v/ supervillain

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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Mizz fyre: your verse was real hot. A lot of good vocab put to use, topic was used really well and the flow was hella good with a nice structure. not really any wordplay or metaphors tho. But all-in-all a tasty verse.

Supervillain: Once again, unmatched, Sheer quality through quantity aswel.
I want to paste a bar that i liked for some reason:
"two weeks after the verdict, sis slit her wrists...and died at age fourteen
i had to learn how to walk again...and mom did her mourning by using morphine"
-This is just to illustrate how good this verse was. Some lovely vocab, multis, topic was used brilliantly and i liked all three parts to it. I think personally the second part was my favourite. Keep it up SV.

I dont vote on topicals normally so if you need me to post more feedback, PM me and il post it straight away.

RTF please peeps

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