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5 | 71.43% |
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03-07-05, 06:51 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Limited Edition
indeph- good:liked the way it related to the topic, liked the ending, okay voacabulary bad: a few lines were strecthed, didnt like the rhyme scheme, couldve had better wordchoice for a lot of lines, a lot of words were repeated and didnte seem like it wwas for a particular meaning (like some pieces) LE- good: nice for a short piece, liked the repetitiveness, felt like it was there for an actual reason, also related to the topic in a nice way, good ending bad: couldve had a way better vocabulary, couldve stayed on topic a lil more, couldve expressed your thoughts a lil more detailed both- good battle, gonna be close overall- vocab- indeph ending- tie worchoice-LE styed on topic- indeph flow/structure-LE v/LE |
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03-17-05, 03:41 PM
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03-18-05, 07:11 PM
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03-25-05, 04:02 PM
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IP: CED7 AFAA
Voted For: Indeph
Indeph Verse Seemd More Deeper Then Limted Editions It Was Very Imaginative Your Verse Was A Little Stretched In Some Parts Seemed More Like A Poem To Me,Each Line Went Well With The Next Line So It Was Easy To Relate To Each Line That You Made Limited Your Verse Was Decent To Didn't Seem Like You Put A Lot Of Emotion In Your Verse It Was Well Balanced And Each Line Followed The Other That's A Good Thing.But Since You Didn't Put More Emotion In It I Think Indeph Won This. /v Indeph Return The Favor |
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03-26-05, 12:56 PM
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03-26-05, 02:22 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Indeph
Pretty decent battle here… L.E. – you had a nice story there, good use of vocabulary, the flow was okay in there, Structure was in place, like usual; practically your story had a little emotion up in there Not as good as you’re other topical battles though, but pretty decent from you here… Indeph – you also had a nice story too, the flow here was a little off & on, the structure Was a little stretchy but it was in good use, your vocabulary was good too, & the emotion Was good too, I thought you came weak here too, not as good as your other topical battles, But good enough though… Overall – both of you had good topical-verses but I think that Indeph came a little better in This topical battle though, no hate to both though…
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