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Class.Sic |
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5 | 71.43% |
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2 | 28.57% |
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: C62D 353D
No offence ta J-Dot, cause i dont have nothin against him, but the whole rhyme scheme was way too basic, an i expected alot more, if it wasnt for the few personals he had, i'd say it was a newbie verse
Thats no hate J-Dot, i just saw alot better from you man
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This was feedback posted for J DOT
IP: CF4E 8780
jdot-i'll have to go with you on this one. i thought your vocab was alot better. and that your rhymes and flow were very structured and put together. you kept up the attack the whole way through and played off his name i liked the line "Hocus pocus, look, Sovereigns back one more time" it made me laugh but yea you had good punches through out the whole thing
class.sic i guess i was expectin a lil something more than what you dropped. your whole structure was off. alright punches sorta middle schoolish though but no hate you kept it st8 through your battle but j-dot jus had ups on you on this one vote//jdot
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IP: 29DB 69F4
lol...vocab....hahahaha your hella dumb...ok ok ok...point out some words in his verse that made you go to the dictionary....lol
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aiight uppin for votes............................
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IP: 3A12 DEDD
Voted For: Class.Sic
Openor=J-Dot Had Multies And Punch Multies=J-Dot^^^ Explains It Personals=Tie Both Ok Multies Strukture=J-Dot,Class Wass Stretched Punches=Tie,Both Had Decent Punches Vokab=None Closer=Tie Ok Closer Fa Yall... J-Dot Came Harder In Thiss Cus He Had Better Punches And He Had Some Ok Multies/Personals All In 1 Bar.. /V J-Dot Rtf................. Vote switched
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IP: 520E B265
Uppin for votes...................................
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
^well, im up 2-1, once that vote gets switched...good look on all tha feed, and tha votes...RTF will be comin soon
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IP: 520E B265
Uppin for votes...................................
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Ask About Me
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IP: 9064 3EC7
yo this was no D.R J dot came mad beter
plus this CLASS SIC nigga is wack....plus a biter...plyus j dot had way better structure and that is where he one in my opinion.... uppin this shit for you guys
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IP: 29DB 69F4
uppin 4 votes...................................only reason im losing is coz of my structure...
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: Class.Sic
Class Alright You Had A Decent Verse, I See Alot Of Personals in Here Some Good And Some Alright, Vocabulary Was Nice, One Thing Is Your Structure Needs Work, You Had Some Decent Punches Here, Some Multi's Not To Much But SOme Was There, Towards The Eding It Got Better, Which I Find Good But It Usualy Starts Of Good Ends Bad, Anyway, You Had A Nice Flow I'll Give This Verse A 9/10 J Dot Alright You Had An Alright Structure But You Had Whack Vocabulary Some Basic Ish, You Need To Change That, Also You Need To Put Meta's In Here, Coz Your Killing Your Own Flow, It Wasn't All That For Serious, It Was Decent Though, Personals You Didn't Have To Much Of It Which Ate Your Flow, Also Your Punches I Didn't Feel Hard, I Feel Like I Heard This Before but I'm Not Sure, Anyways You Get An 8.2/10 No Hate Vote=Class
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This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
IP: B123 EAEB
Polls,elivate yall 2 both verses were laking real punches
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This was feedback posted for J DOT
IP: 828D 0B7A
u deff got this, but i fort class was nok aswel? anyway nice drop.
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IP: 31E1 91F6
wow...uppin this battle? dude is wack.......................
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Is F'in Bored
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IP: A4E7 A821
Voted For: Class.Sic
Class.Sic takes this one but this was a close battle U a bitch, u kno it, I kno it, now RV gon’ kno it U on that hoe shit, 4 real, now its time to expose it THERE'S NO PUNCH HERE Aint no need to spit back, I already merked u once When u were ‘Lyrical Havok’, now ima serve u son NICE PERSONAL BUT THERE WAS NO PUNCH While u switchin yo names, u shuld be focused on rhymes Hocus pocus, look, Sovereigns back one more time ONCE AGAIN NICE PERSONAL DECENT PUNCH We all kno this is yo life, and u still come up shorter than elfs ...u leave, just to come back and introduce yoself NICE PERSONAL GOOD LINE U rap skill less…. rather brainless, u just a lame U wuna clap at JDOT….nigga say my name NO PUNCH JUST AN INSULTING SET UP THAT WASN'T CREATIVE …..Da beef done arose, now its time to attack ‘Establish’ hot barz from Dot, but please, stay to tha back DIDN'T SEE THE PUNCH NICE WORDPLAY WITH ESTABLISHMENT tha end is near, time to expose u clearly put a microphone in yo head and u still wouldnt hear me OK PUNCH OK CLOSER it seems to me you got so caught up in having beaten him before that you filled your verses with that and forgot the punches and metaphores Put this king in the ring, dont expect any punches... Not swing or a fling, from any of his newb bunches... DECENT LINE WEAK PUNCH At ease, ill NOK his eyes out till he look Chinese... Have ya ma askin "Can I see your Green Card Please"... ONCE AGAIN DECENT LINE WITH A WEAK PUNCH Dark Ass Cat, from the dwellings beneath my Charles Scwab... * When you at BAT, it aint the plate, but askin for the MANs Job...* DECENT PUNCH OK LINE Know whats hopeless, your dopeless, your lifeline is comin up ropeless... Kid like Bush, runnin his country into the ground and sayin "Were makin pro-gress"... THIS WAS A GOOD LINE WITH A NICE PUNCH, BUT PRO-GRESS IS PUSHING IT Only came coz the best left his crew, place i didnt want to inhibit... but do me a favor and dust off your ankles like a museam exhibit... BAD PERSONAL OK PUNCH It seems to me that j dot did more bragging about beating classic then he did punching. Maybe i missed something but this is my vote no hate to anyone.
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