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02-22-05, 01:48 PM
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ayo girl only thing i saw messy was yer structure i found it kinda hard to follow but it wasnt as bad as empires soo other than that good verse ayo chekk out tha song i did fer my boi in poetic scriptures yall post me sum feedbakk thanx yall good job again ma
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02-22-05, 03:00 PM
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lol i wouldve won that even without the no show my verse is just harder period but we can set a battle wit those exact verses and i gurantee youll lose fiya no hate but im better then you only my hater said you won and even my enemys saying i beat you im better then you fiya no hate just being real
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02-22-05, 03:08 PM
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yo I know C.A.L.I. is gonna come up in here and say some shit about how I'm riDin' her but ummm...I'd have to go wid LadyFiya on this cuz even though I ain't get a couple of her punchez, the ones that WEREN'T over my head (likely cuz iono you) were creative and her werdplay was kiLLin' your verse duke...your structure is SHIT on a platter and your punchez are played as HELL man...she didn't come as good as she could've but she covered punchez and her wordplay both being more creative than anything in your verse...F.Y.I. to whoever said something about flow, this is TEXT, flow doesn't matter 'til you pick up a mic, just don't stretch your bars... VOTE: Lady Fiya
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02-22-05, 08:45 PM
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since I need to repeat myself...I said the same thing you said Fiya, lol...
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02-22-05, 03:13 PM
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^no One Your A Hater And Mad I Wouldnt Let You In C.s 2 Your Her Friend Three My Strture Is Perfect Idiot Its Lining The Punches Damn Your Dumb My Punches And Personals Were Way Better You Never Heard That Frozen Line Show Anything Similar And Ill Leave Rv So No Bitch Your Lieing And I Heard Your Audios You Fucking Suck A I Daughter Wack Clone Fucking Wack Wack Wack And You Been Ducking Me Therefore You Opinon Dont Count AND YES BITCH FIYA HAS MORE D.R THEN ANYONE ON THIS SITE PERIOD THATS WHY SHE KEEPS POSTING PICS SHE CAN FRONT ALL SHE WANT BUT AINT NO REASON TO KEEP POSTING PICS SHE DO THAT ON PURPOSE
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02-22-05, 03:21 PM
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awwww, I love the way you react to the things I say, you love me...you really love me
 ...my apologies for dissapointing your eGo, but I can give a FUCK less about you and or C.S. kyd...and maybe you DON'T have dickrider...no one else has room to get on cuz you're too busy blowing yourself bitch...and werd? I'm wack?...shurrrrrrrr little buddy...and nain't nobody duckin' your ass cracka, I said I don't FUCKing battle and uummmm, I DON'T!... however I do make the occassional exception...like I said, when I feel like it I'll call you out...so sit the FUCK down, shut the FUCK up and continue being the "wannabe" that you are  ....
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02-22-05, 03:42 PM
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U dragrace hygiene cuz u iron jeans in driveways, Q’s dame?
Not being profane, u got “D” fault wins 2 like ur user name… …your parked riders in reverse to start and end on E* He beefs wit Jury cuz Flow ONLY made you a-ttorney! U won respect as an artist?! Can’t even throw a hard hit.. With a name this bitch stole from commercials for carpet! vs. You not nice you just got more dickriders then most porn sets Made a thread you was (leaving 2 months ago..........) now show me them tities  ....what the fuck you aint gone yet?! |
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02-22-05, 07:40 PM
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^^thanQ.. i'm sorry cali but people that said you won put FLOW and STRUCTURE over personals and punches.. you had only one.. i knew i might have to breakdown the first bar..
well i said he drag-race... tha Q is gay (drag), he so FUCKIN FAT he has to iron his XXXL jeans in driveways... (race)..... i thought y'all would get that part.. oh well.. you had no solid hits at me (IMO).. and that ghostwriter line was hella played and you put that as a closer.. **this site obviously puts flow and structure OVER punches and personals.. which i have yet to find out why in the hell why.. ** but i respect the opinions and feedback, keep it coming kiddos..  and CALI wtf? i only had a few pics, i didn't even post none when i first came here.. it took months before i actually posted a pic.. but if u talkin bout my lil' fashion show.. shit i did it cuz i want to.. you the one gettin a yearly award for d/r's so don't point that bullshit at me.. even your dickriders voted you, now that's what i call sad.. if i had any rider that you mention of i wouldn't still have a battle open vs. Anxiety for over 4 months.. now talk and say sumthin..
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02-22-05, 07:49 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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It puts flows an structure ahead of everything because without the flow an structure there is no verse, its basically jokes, an not rhymes
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02-22-05, 07:54 PM
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Aint Tha Place To Post,but I Think Lady Got This One...no Hate Cali...why Post This Here Tho?
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02-22-05, 07:54 PM
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^no... text doesn't have a "flow" it depends on who's reading it... cuz if i spit that on a beat i guarantee it would sound nothing like how 1 person read it.. and it would flow perfectly if i leave 1 or 2 words out.. but i see what E Looch was sayin... my goodness. *smh*
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02-22-05, 07:55 PM
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i want feedback, j dot that's y..
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02-22-05, 07:57 PM
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i was gonna do that, but i set up another thread yesterday & i checked and cali didn't.. i sent him a pm while he was online too.. so i said fuck it and posted it this mornin.. i dun care about a win (like the title says) i want feedback on this..
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02-22-05, 08:00 PM
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Ah aight. Well I liked your punches. It's nice to see creativity. What's your AIM Fiya? We need to talk.
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02-22-05, 08:01 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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Lady, the way you worderd your verse is just all wrong, thats what people are getting at, i'm not trynna hate, because you have alot more creativity than C.A.L.I, an dont think i dont hate him neither, the boys a bigger bitch than you are (jokes)...but yeah, your structure was just choppy as hell, it had no rythm too the flow, maybe it would have sounded better on audio, who knows? ....but thats not the point because this is audio, i had this arguement with Kon.Fliktz few days ago, these people have a certain structure an style, an if the vets on this site have a diffrent style ta you, then you basically have too adapt too it, as i am trying ta do, because my flows are diffrent as are yours too most people on the site, understand where i'm coming from?
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