shit like this is mad played

nice attempt,i was feeling the message but the words/rhymes and everything were boo boo no offense,and your lines were stretched,however you did seem to have energy and deliver a healthy message so its coo but thaths all

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Shit was nice, flow was right on Point, hook was decent, an it was a dope all round peice
7.5/10

Holdin it down For NOK, We be droppin O.M's like Blaw

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thanx yall...and dis was not somethin dat was pre-writtin...dis shit was a freestyle...seem like a nigga said dat...no offense takin...a nigga still elevatin yo...
-Doe Bagz

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Lol...That's how you handle beef my nigga..
I've trained you well *bows*
He finished,let's see if he come back at you.
Keep runnin this OM shit...Nice track nigga.

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^thanx 4 tha insight deph...lyin ass nigga, but good insight...uppin
-Doe Bagz

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it was an overall ight track 7.0/10 but stretched lines, vocab was basic & need elevation but it'll come ova time

the chours sound a lil like a couple lines from eminems "the sauce"
but other wise i liked it 7/10

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

thanx...i was listenin to "piggybank" and "nail in tha coffin"...i wasnt listenin to "tha sauce"...but yeah, thanx yall...uppin

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pretty good diss, u need to work on ya flow a lil more n then you'll b str8..
uppin for you++++++++++++++++++

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OM's

yeah...thanx...uppin
-Doe Bagz

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yeah...thanx...uppin
-Doe Bagz

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yeah...thanx...uppin
-Doe Bagz

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yeah...thanx...uppin
-Doe Bagz

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