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Young Blaze 5 100.00%
sr. royal_t 0 0%
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Old 03-13-05, 11:04 PM   #16
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Royal T- Your verse was aight......Just your structure sucked...it was hard to read n all.....plus i thought your punches werent the greatest, but decent....but overall manye just elevate...

Young Blaze- I like your verse, had some nice personals and some hard hitin punches.....but work on your structure...but everything else was good....so overall you got this with better verse and punches.....

RETURN FAVOR IN MY SIG.......or i will get this vote removed..(seriously) its gettin slept on......
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Old 03-14-05, 05:06 PM   #17
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Old 03-14-05, 07:57 PM   #18
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All votes will be returned in your Sig..is bullshit...........
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Old 03-15-05, 10:37 AM   #19
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Old 03-15-05, 11:50 AM   #20
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Voted For: Young Blaze

this battle was very confusing & hard 2 read 4 me:
young blaze- ight, let's c ur punches were ok..a few
played out lines..work on ur wordplay..it
flowed ok in certain areas at times..multis
were a few..meta's were good

sr. royal_t- ok ur opener seemed forced..ur punches
were played out..wordplay needs work also..
it was not a consistent flow in ur verse..u
had a couple of multi's..meta's ur not there

overall- young blaze & royal_t need 2 work on ur
structure..verses need serious elevation..but
both verses were ok 4 newbies tho

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Old 03-15-05, 06:35 PM   #21
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Old 03-16-05, 10:16 AM   #22
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Old 03-17-05, 01:16 PM   #23
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Old 03-17-05, 07:50 PM   #24
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Old 03-17-05, 08:24 PM   #25
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Young Blaze
Get something for the Herpes G, and im the city spud while you so juvenile they call you the murhpy lee/
Faggot sayin he murkin me, but your shits like the unemployed the way its not workin G, and even if he rapped with a switch blade he still wouldn’t be hurtin me/

you smell so gimp be gone, I only see a nerd, T's a champ? yea of special-Ed Olymp-ions/
Wasting this, witch 1 line I got rid of him, I could strap a bomb to royal and he still couldn’t blow up… even if they was Palestinian/

Aiight trick, you can drop the act ya bitch, cos I’ll stretch you out with a rap to diss, and crack ya clit/
we all know you cant rap prick can only clap dick, you spit so much SHIT its like your tongues a laxative/

Your just a bitch, you blast and miss, speaking of miss you probably gotta squat your ass just to piss/
im sorry I had to bust your tits, but you called me out so in other words.. this ass kicking? you asked for it /
My flows are toxic, so like anthrax terrorsists im choosin you, and like Harvard grads im rooming you/
i dont care though, cos you just 1 of those gooney loons , cos your rhymes are like re-runs of the fukin looney tunes/

Leave you fleein the coast and as quick and easy I can finish you.. I’ll give u a reason to boast/
14 years ago, I hit up Royals mom with a "punchline", and in "9 months", she got the "joke"/ (ooooohhh shiiitt)

lots of disses
nice punches and good structure
nice elevation
8/10

st royal
iight yo lets keep this rap plain and simple/you got bigga titties then ya girl and all u got is nipples/listen herre young blaze /my rapz can have you amazed for dayz/u cant rap so why dont u stop while you ahead/and if u brang dat shit u sayin to to da atl best believe u gonna get feeled up wit lead/dawg u soft u need to come at me strong/cuz u da type of nicca who would wear a medium size thong/u dumber than all dem niccaz who voted for bush in da election/little ass probably cant even get an erection/my niccaz say i remind them of Ali/ cuz im da king of da world thatz why they call me royal_t/i aint a pusha im a ridah/ya girl is to but in a different way cuz she like to ride a.............../man i aint even gotta go there/cuz yo ass softa then a male who does hair/now go ahead and say yo dumb shit like a fuckin doof/i aint tryna be man im just tellin u da truth/cuz u gettin old just like a rerun/and tell ya hoe ass girl i wont my fuckin refund

work on structure
a little hard 2 read
good disses
not as many punches on opponent
work on elevatin n u b iight
7.5/10

my v/Young Blaze

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